Will you read "Nearer Than The Moon" and c/c?

. . . ..........Nearer Than The Moon.......... . . Dictionaries, claiming to reveal, Only highlight all that words can't feel. E-K-G's, with monitoring lines, Loss of love, within a heart, won't find. Calenders, created to expire, Show no markings, circles of desire Happy friends,... show more .
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Dictionaries, claiming to reveal,
Only highlight all that words can't feel.
E-K-G's, with monitoring lines,
Loss of love, within a heart, won't find.

Calenders, created to expire,
Show no markings, circles of desire
Happy friends, concerned with free advice,
Never wield a healing grief device.

Smallest gestures, large in meaning sent,
Yield a wave of feeling never spent.
Eyes of warmth keep watch when far away.
Selfish eyes grow cold in what they take.

Future hopes, with edges warped a bit,
Yield a join in truth that will not fit.
Losing love and grieving, some presume
Answers never nearer than The Moon.
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Update: NOTE: (Well meaning words of advice). Don't compose on this Question Page. The original poem, Sea Of Storms, that was to occupy this space, I decided not to use and develop more fully after it "fermented" a few days. I erased it and ad libbed this piece from those old standbys, "loss of"... show more NOTE:
(Well meaning words of advice).
Don't compose on this Question Page.
The original poem, Sea Of Storms, that was to
occupy this space, I decided not to use and develop
more fully after it "fermented" a few days.
I erased it and ad libbed this piece from those old standbys,
"loss of" or "unrequited love".
I was on the last line of the third stanza, thought I pressed Backspace,
but must have hit an F key above.
The intro page of a previous question popped up.
This replaced the tab on the task bar and the poem disappeared.
It was 3am when I exited to Notepad to start from scratch.
It's amazing how quickly the mind forgets when sleepy at 3am.
The version I lost was better in flow, for there were a few tie-in
phrases I couldn't remember.

Also, events over the past few weeks
have kept me away from my PC and Yap.
Though I've missed answering many if your posts,
I have followed up and am almost
finished reading (and enjoying) the compositi
Update 2: Thanks to:
Marty C
Yorkshireman
Dallas
Cheese
Sue
Thomas
doe
PANDORA
Hiway 101
and Roann
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