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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 7 years ago

請幫我看我的英文自傳是否妥當

Graduated from the Civil Engineering

In the building trade work

But I like the work to diversification

For the work of the instruments feel tired

Want to try to sell the work

Can contact a happy work environment

Do not like frogs in a well

Holidays

Love photography, reading, cooking, flower arrangement, gardening

I'm a very serious person

Especially favorite

I am more active

Thank you for reading my autobiography

Wrong place please advise

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自己一邊按翻譯一邊改的英文自傳

因為自己的英文程度真的很爛

如果有文法不通順的地方

請告訴我

萬分感恩!!!謝謝

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  • 7 years ago
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    版主大大您好:

    我問過老外,不會錯的,

    希望有幫助到您 !

    我的嗜好要用頓號隔開所有選項,

    不是用逗號喔。

    職業用 occupation 比 work 好喔。

    愛好用 favor 比 like 好喔。

    井底之蛙,底是 bottom。

    Civil Engineering graduates

    at the building trade occupation.

    But I favor the labor diversification.

    For the labor of the instruments feels tiring.

    Want to test the labor sale.

    Can touch a happy labor environment.

    Don't favor frogs of a well bottom.

    Holidays

    favor photography、reading、cooking、flower arrangement、gardening.

    I'm a very serious human

    Especially favor

    I am more movable.

    Thank you for reading my autobiography

    Wrong place to invites advice.

    2013-05-18 11:20:28 補充:

    不好意思,

    不定詞是 to invite advice

  • 7 years ago

    英文中並沒有 "、" 這個標點符號, "、" 這個標點符號(頓號)是用於中文,同樣的情況在英文中是用 "," 這個標點符號(逗點);就像 "。" 這個標點符號是中文的「句點」,而英文的「句點」則是以 "." 表示。

  • 7 years ago

    ---Errors and Corrections on Autography:-

    Graduated from Civil Engineering

    In the Building trade work branches

    I like the work to diversify (v.)

    Because work on instruments feel tired.

    Want to sell my work

    Working in a Happy Working environment

    Not be a frog in a well.

    In Holidays

    Love photography (n)

    reading, cooking,

    flower arrangement, gardening.

    Have a very serious personality

    esp. my preferred favourite

    Popular and active accepted !

    Thanks for reading my autobiography,

    Memoirs and Reminiscences.

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