邱伯 asked in 教育與參考考試 · 8 years ago

請英文高手幫我檢查翻譯

如題,這是是我要上台報告時的草稿,因為我英文很爛....

所以希望高手們可以幫我修正一下,而且要比較口語一點,然後用字不能太難

我文法不太好,請各位幫幫我~~謝謝

哈囉~我是Allen 我的組員有1234我們本來是想帶小朋友一起畫畫的,但因為一些因素下我們改變了我們的行程,以遊樂的方式去貼近小朋友

Hi~I’m Allen and my group member have 1,2,3,4

In the beginning,we plan to drawing pictures with children,but consider that we haven’t much time to do this, so we change our plan to play some group game to closeing the children.

星期二早上我們來到的東海大學附設幼稚園,一開始我們非常的緊張,因為其實我們都沒有甚麼跟小孩接觸的經驗,我們很怕無法控制整個局面,也很怕小朋友不理我們,但進到教室以後發現其實小孩都非常的聽話而且很配合我們也非常歡迎我們加入他們的世界

Tuesday morning,we want to the THU Kindergarten.At first we are very never,because we haven’t any experience about how to take care to the children.we thought that children will out of control and we can’t holding them in short time.And we also fear that children not interest in our activity.But when we go into the classroom we find that they are very welcome we enjoy them and everyone are very happy to working with us. And we get along well in a short time.

在這些遊戲結束後,我們心不甘情不願的離開了幼稚園,小孩們的熱情與活潑讓我們覺得自己又突然變回小孩,遠離煩惱,我們都希望能再去幼稚園找他們玩樂

After the activity,we left with a sad may.We hope we have much time to play with them,and we learn a lots thing on them.In a short time we feel we become a child again and leave our warry along.All of us hope that we can have a lots of fun with them maybe next time.

Update:

阿錩~~~實在太感謝你了~~

我不是外文系的,只是選了一堂很煎熬的英文課

關於你推薦的英英字典我覺得很不錯!!我會去嘗試的

真得好感謝你~~

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    哈囉~我是Allen 我的組員有1234我們本來是想帶小朋友一起畫畫的,但因為一些因素下我們改變了我們的行程,以遊樂的方式去貼近小朋友

    Hi~I’m Allen and my group has four members.

    At first, we decided to draw pictures with the children. But in case we wouldn't have much time to do this, we planed to play some group games to get along with the children.

    星期二早上我們來到的東海大學附設幼稚園,一開始我們非常的緊張,因為其實我們都沒有甚麼跟小孩接觸的經驗,我們很怕無法控制整個局面,也很怕小朋友不理我們,但進到教室以後發現其實小孩都非常的聽話而且很配合我們也非常歡迎我們加入他們的世界

    We went to the THU Kindergarten in Tuesday morning. At first, we are very nervous,because we haven’t got any experience of taking care of children.We are worried that children will be out of our control and we might not handled them in the short time. And we also supposed that children might not be interested in our activity.But when we walked into the classroom, we found that we were very welcome. We enjoyed ourselves with them, and every children there were very happy to be with us. Finally, we all got along well in a short time.

    在這些遊戲結束後,我們心不甘情不願的離開了幼稚園,小孩們的熱情與活潑讓我們覺得自己又突然變回小孩,遠離煩惱,我們都希望能再去幼稚園找他們玩樂

    After finishing the activity,we felt sad when we were about to leave.We hoped we could have more time to play with them,and we learned a lot of things from them.There was a moment we thought as a child and left our daily worries behind because of the children. All of us hoped that we could get a chance to play with them next time.

    既然是過去的事情,要以過去式書寫。

    有一些句字,中文和英文兜不起來,我以英文為主。

    另外become (變成) 小孩,就真的變成小孩了,所以不能這麼寫,這是中式思考。

    Fear 是恐懼一件事情,「我們怕」要用worry(擔心)

    2013-05-12 19:45:22 補充:

    最後容我雞婆一下,我猜你應該是念外文吧,而且距離畢業還有一段時間,從現在開始使用英英字典吧,這樣你會進步神速喔。 http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/article?qid... 這篇文章供你參考。

    2013-05-12 19:47:10 補充:

    訂正一下吧 At first, we were very nervous,because we hadn’t got any experience of taking care of children.

    2013-05-12 19:47:45 補充:

    We were worried that children will be out of our control and we might not handled them in the short time.

    Source(s): 十年以上英文經驗的我
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