小緯 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 7 years ago

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Of course, monsters are probably stories which people have invented.

There are tigers in Siberia, in northern Asia, that reach 4 meters in length.

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  • 7 years ago
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    原句:Of course, monsters are probably stories which people have invented.

    修改後: Of course, monsters probably are stories, which people have invented.

    修改重點: 1. 副詞改在動詞(are)前, 修飾動詞 2. which前加逗號, 當副詞子句, 修飾句子 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------原句:There are tigers in Siberia, in northern Asia, that reach 4 meters in length.

    修改後: There are tigers that reach a length of four meters in Siberia and Northern Asia.

    修改重點: 1. 把形容詞子句移到先行詞後 2. 兩個地點合併成 in Siberia and Northern Asia 4. 因為是地名Northern 改成大寫N 3. 把4改成four (12以前都應用英文拼字) 4. 有兩個in在句後不好, 改成a length of four meters放在reach後, 以減少一個in

    2013-05-10 12:59:53 補充:

    第一句再次修正成為:

    Of course, monsters probably are stories that people have invented.

    修改重點:

    換成that, 前面不加逗號, 當形容詞子句限定用法

    第二句的地名應改為 in Siberia, Northern Asia

    如ben****** 說的, 北亞中的西伯利亞, 比較嚴謹

    2013-05-10 13:40:51 補充:

    第一句:

    Of course, monsters probably are stories that people have invented.

    其中因為是形容詞子句限定用法, 關係代名詞用that 比較適合

    此處that people have invented 用主動的方式表達, 是因為關係代名詞, 當子句中的受詞

    此時that 可以省略

    變成Of course, monsters probably are stories people have invented. 也可以

  • Louis
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    monsters並不是stories,而是stories裡的怪物。

  • 蕙安
    Lv 5
    7 years ago

    Of course, monsters are probably stories which people have invented.

    Of course, monsters are probably stories which have been invented by people.

    當然,怪物八成只是人們捏造出來的故事。

    There are tigers in Siberia, in northern Asia, that reach 4 meters in length.

    There are tigers that reach 4 meters in length in Siberia and northern Asia.

    在西伯利亞和北亞洲有身長達四公尺的老虎。

    以上是拋磚引玉的建議。

    2013-05-10 11:26:30 補充:

    訂正:

    in Siberia, in northern Asia指的不是兩個地方,而是在北亞洲的西伯利亞才對。

    There are tigers that reach 4 meters in length in Siberia, northern Asia.

    位於北亞洲的西伯利亞,有身長達四公尺的老虎。

    至於北亞洲northern Asia,n可大寫可不大寫。

    2013-05-10 11:28:56 補充:

    另外,謝謝Louis大師的提醒。

    修改第一句並總結為:

    Of course, monsters are probably in stories which have been invented by people.

    當然,怪物八成只存在於人們捏造出來的故事中。

    There are tigers that reach 4 meters in length in Siberia, northern Asia.

    位於北亞洲的西伯利亞,有身長達四公尺的老虎。

    2013-05-10 11:29:32 補充:

    謝謝Louis大師,答案修正於前。

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