A song for my best friend?

She's so amazing and were coming up 10 years of friendship this year, can you please help me with my song,critique it and let me know what parts work and what parts don't thanks so much.

Dear Jo:

Verse:

Dear Jo I've been lying awake now

Can't quite figure out how

10 years have passed us by,

And I'm not going to lie

You are awesome.

Verse:

You are the most beautiful person I have ever met

We'll be friends for many more years yet.

We are sarcastic like it's going out of fashion

But we know how to laugh and love with compassion

Oh I would be alone in this world with out you.

Chorus:

The random things you say

They make my everyday.

You know how to annoy me,

but that's just the way it's gotta be.

Coz you.....

Are my best friend.

Verse:

Your comedy has always been better then mine

With a crazy as laugh every time.

Your drawings are amazing and perfect

I can only have the utmost respect.

I'm lucky to have such an amazing best friend.

Verse:

I'm sorry if you get embarrassed but

You never would have known what,

makes you so special to me,

Now you will see.

Chorus:

The random things you say

They make my everyday.

You know how to annoy me

but that's just the way it's gotta be.

Coz you........

Are my best friend.

Final Verse:

Dear Jo there's no lying awake now,

I can just smile and remember how,

many amazing memories we've had together,

No matter what the weather.

Jo I love you.

1 Answer

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  • 7 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    This is very sweet. I hope your friend enjoys it :)

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