Uma asked in 社會與文化語言 · 7 years ago

誰可以幫我改以下英文對話

這是我自己寫的 我怕有問題 可以幫我看看哪理不順或文法用錯地方嗎?

A女:You look happy. Anything good happening?

B女:Well. Sort of…

A女:Come on. Tell me. Fess up.

B女: My bag was stolen from a boy to help me save back.

A女:Oh, really. That is great news. What does he look like?

B女:He is tall and muscular, short hair.

A女:That sounds like he is pretty cute. What do you think of him?

B女:He is a nice guy and very considerate.

A女:Oh, it's love at first sight.

C男:I'm so sorry for being late.

A女:What’s the matter with you?

C男:I didn’t mean to be late. I have just met a girl needs my help.

A女:Let me introduce to you. This is my college friend.

C男: Nice to meet you. I am C. I'm a Financial and Economic Law student.

B女: Oh! My God! You’re my hero I want to thank you for helping me.

C男: This world is too small. So we're together again. It must be fate .

C男: In fact, I'm a little hungry, Go get some dinner!

B女: Let me treat you to dinner.

C男: Well, if you put it that way. OK.

C男:And… I know there is a good restaurant to eat.

C男:The restaurant is very close to us.

B女:That sounds nice.

A女:Good. Let's go.

A女:你看起來很開心發生什麼事嗎?

B女:還好啦

A女:少來了,坦白告訴我

B女:我的包包被偷了。有一個男生幫我拿了回來。

A女:喔~真的。這是一個好消息。他長得如何?

B女:他長得很高有肌肉,短頭髮。

A女:聽起來他很帥,那你對他感覺怎麼樣啊?

B女:人不錯,非常體貼。

A女:喔!看起來你是一見鍾情了.

C男:不好意思我遲到了。

A女:你是怎麼搞得?

C男:我不是有意遲到。我遇到一個女生需要我的幫助。

A女:對了。我給你介紹一位我大學的朋友。

C男:很高興認識你,我是XX。我是財經系學生。

B女:天阿,你是我的英雄。我非常謝謝你幫助我。

C男:這世界真小,我們真有緣。

C男:其實我肚子有點餓,我們去吃晚餐吧!

B女:就讓我請妳吃飯吧

C男: 既然你這麼說,好吧。

C男:而且…我知道有一家很好吃的餐廳,那家餐廳離我們非常近。

A女:聽起來不錯。

A女:好,我們走吧。

4 Answers

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  • 7 years ago
    Best Answer

    你的句子已經蠻有水準了 以下幾個地方注意一下

    A女:You look happy. Anything good happening?

    >>>(did) anything good happen?

    A女:Come on. Tell me. Fess up.

    >>>fess up 是「承認、坦白」在這裡用不太適合

    >>>Come on. Tell me more. or come on. fill me in.

    My bag was stolen from a boy to help me save back.

    >>>My bag was stolen and a boy help me to get it back.

    A女:Let me introduce to you. This is my college friend.

    >>>Let me introduce you (two). This is my college friend.

    這裡的you是"你們" introduce 的用法要特別注意 請看下面連結

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQDHhkoAfDk

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    B女: Oh! My God! You’re my hero I want to thank you for helping me.

    >>>Oh! My God! You’re my hero. I'm so appreciate your help.

    C男: This world is too small. So we're together again. It must be fate .

    >>>What a small world. So we meet again. that must be destiny .

    C男: In fact, I'm a little hungry, Go get some dinner!

    >>>acctually, I'm a little hungry, Let's go get a bite (to eat)!

    B女: Let me treat you to dinner.

    >>>That would be my treat.

    C男: Well, if you put it that way. OK.

    >>>Well, it you insist. or Well, if you say so.

    C男:And… I know there is a good restaurant to eat.

    >>>And… I know there is a good restaurant, and it's not too far away.

    2013-03-31 00:22:50 補充:

    >>>My bag was stolen and a boy helpED me to get it back.

  • 7 years ago

    電影王

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  • Ed
    Lv 6
    7 years ago

    B女: My bag was stolen from a boy to help me save back.=> My bag was stolen and a boy helped me (to) get it back.

    I have just met a girl needs my help.=> I have just met a girl who needs my help.

    C男:The restaurant is very close to us.=> The restaurant is very close to here.

  • 7 years ago

    沒有錯翻得好意事差不多

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