誰可以幫我改以下英文對話
這是我自己寫的 我怕有問題 可以幫我看看哪理不順或文法用錯地方嗎?
A女:You look happy. Anything good happening？
B女:Well. Sort of…
A女:Come on. Tell me. Fess up.
B女: My bag was stolen from a boy to help me save back.
A女:Oh, really. That is great news. What does he look like?
B女:He is tall and muscular, short hair.
A女:That sounds like he is pretty cute. What do you think of him?
B女:He is a nice guy and very considerate.
A女:Oh, it's love at first sight.
C男:I'm so sorry for being late.
A女:What’s the matter with you?
C男:I didn’t mean to be late. I have just met a girl needs my help.
A女:Let me introduce to you. This is my college friend.
C男: Nice to meet you. I am C. I'm a Financial and Economic Law student.
B女: Oh! My God! You’re my hero I want to thank you for helping me.
C男: This world is too small. So we're together again. It must be fate .
C男: In fact, I'm a little hungry, Go get some dinner!
B女: Let me treat you to dinner.
C男: Well, if you put it that way. OK.
C男:And… I know there is a good restaurant to eat.
C男:The restaurant is very close to us.
B女:That sounds nice.
A女:Good. Let's go.
A女:你看起來很開心發生什麼事嗎?
B女:還好啦
A女:少來了，坦白告訴我
B女:我的包包被偷了。有一個男生幫我拿了回來。
A女:喔~真的。這是一個好消息。他長得如何?
B女:他長得很高有肌肉，短頭髮。
A女:聽起來他很帥，那你對他感覺怎麼樣啊？
B女:人不錯，非常體貼。
A女:喔！看起來你是一見鍾情了.
C男:不好意思我遲到了。
A女:你是怎麼搞得?
C男:我不是有意遲到。我遇到一個女生需要我的幫助。
A女:對了。我給你介紹一位我大學的朋友。
C男:很高興認識你，我是XX。我是財經系學生。
B女:天阿，你是我的英雄。我非常謝謝你幫助我。
C男:這世界真小，我們真有緣。
C男:其實我肚子有點餓，我們去吃晚餐吧!
B女:就讓我請妳吃飯吧
C男: 既然你這麼說，好吧。
C男:而且…我知道有一家很好吃的餐廳，那家餐廳離我們非常近。
A女:聽起來不錯。
A女:好，我們走吧。
4 Answers
- 7 years agoBest Answer
你的句子已經蠻有水準了 以下幾個地方注意一下
A女:You look happy. Anything good happening？
>>>(did) anything good happen?
A女:Come on. Tell me. Fess up.
>>>fess up 是「承認、坦白」在這裡用不太適合
>>>Come on. Tell me more. or come on. fill me in.
My bag was stolen from a boy to help me save back.
>>>My bag was stolen and a boy help me to get it back.
A女:Let me introduce to you. This is my college friend.
>>>Let me introduce you (two). This is my college friend.
這裡的you是"你們" introduce 的用法要特別注意 請看下面連結
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQDHhkoAfDk
B女: Oh! My God! You’re my hero I want to thank you for helping me.
>>>Oh! My God! You’re my hero. I'm so appreciate your help.
C男: This world is too small. So we're together again. It must be fate .
>>>What a small world. So we meet again. that must be destiny .
C男: In fact, I'm a little hungry, Go get some dinner!
>>>acctually, I'm a little hungry, Let's go get a bite (to eat)!
B女: Let me treat you to dinner.
>>>That would be my treat.
C男: Well, if you put it that way. OK.
>>>Well, it you insist. or Well, if you say so.
C男:And… I know there is a good restaurant to eat.
>>>And… I know there is a good restaurant, and it's not too far away.
2013-03-31 00:22:50 補充：
>>>My bag was stolen and a boy helpED me to get it back.
- EdLv 67 years ago
B女: My bag was stolen from a boy to help me save back.=> My bag was stolen and a boy helped me (to) get it back.
I have just met a girl needs my help.=> I have just met a girl who needs my help.
C男:The restaurant is very close to us.=> The restaurant is very close to here.
