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Anonymous asked in 社會及文化語言 · 7 years ago

改改我的英文文法(急)20點

呢個係我作的故事, 但文法有錯,好小字,幫手改

Then, Red Riding’s Grandma unlocked the queen magic, but the wolf was injury. Queen realized that her magic is unlocked.

Wolf: I appreciate you to save my life, thank you so much

Queen: Who are you? He is my servant and he want to escape so I punished him. Get out!

Wolf: Please help me; I don’t willing to become her servant.

Grandma: I decided to save wolf, please let him off.

Queen: The wolf is mine! He never ever releasing.

Grandma: (incantation)

Grandma stops the clocks and took the injurious wolf to her home. She lived in a small house with her grandson.

Red Riding was opening the door.

Red Riding (enters): Grandma, Why you so late? I am hungry

Grandma: I just save a wolf, help me put him on the bed.

Red Riding: All right, what happened with him?

Grandma told the wolf’s matter when they was having the dinner.

After next day, Grandma leaved home, Red Riding first time contact with the wolf.

Red Riding: Good morning

Wolf: Good morning, and who are you?

Red Riding: I am Grandma’s grandson, nice to meet you.

Wolf: I am too hungry; can you give me some foods?

Red Riding: Yes, sure. Last night have some foods

Wolf: What is this food, it tasty

Red Riding: This is the chicken! You ever haven’t eaten?

Wolf: Yes, I have not eaten this food.

Wolf: Do you feel boring? Let us play the card game.

Red Riding: That’s good idea!

After wolf eating, they play the card game.

Wolf: That’s funny! You lose again!

Red Riding: You so lucky!

Wolf: Yes, I feel lucky that your grandmother saves me and I can meet you. Thanks god! But I scare that queen is coming find me.

Red Riding: Not happen your cases again, don’t be afraid, my grandmother is much of stronger and she has a large of power.

Wolf: Thanks a lot. When I get well, I will leave there.

Red Riding: You can don’t leave, I still want to have a brother to play with me. In that place, I feel boring.

Wolf: If you don’t mind, I am willing to stay here certainly.

Red Riding: Really? I hope so.

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  • Anonymous
    7 years ago
    Best Answer

    Then, Red Riding’s Grandmaunlocked the queen magic, but the wolf was injured. The Queenrealized that her magic was unlocked.

    Wolf: Thank you so much for saving my life, and I really appreciateit.

    Queen: Who are you? He is my servant and he wanted to escape, so Ipunished him. Get out!

    Wolf: Please help me; I don’t willing to become her servant.

    Grandma: I decided to save wolf, please let him off.

    Queen: The wolf is mine! He had never gotreleased.

    Grandma: (incantation)

    Grandma stopped theclocks and took the injured wolf toher home. She lived in a small house with her grandson.

    Red Riding was opening the door.

    Red Riding (enters): Grandma, Why are you so late? I am hungry

    Grandma: I just saved a wolf,help me to put him on the bed.

    Red Riding: All right, what happened with him?

    Grandma left home after the next day, Red Riding had contactwith the wolf forthe first time.

    Red Riding: Good morning

    Wolf: Good morning, and who are you?

    Red Riding: I am Grandma’s grandson, nice to meet you.

    Wolf: I am too hungry; can you give me some food?

    Red Riding: Yes, sure. We had some food last night.

    Wolf: What were those food? They were so tasty.Red Riding: Chicken. You never haveit?Wolf: No, I have not eaten this typeof food.

    Wolf: Do you feel bored?Let’s play the card game.

    Red Riding: That’s a good idea!

    After the wolf finished eating, they played thecard game.

    Wolf: That’s funny! You lose again!

    Red Riding: You are so lucky!

    Wolf: Yes, I feel lucky that your grandmother saved me and I had the chance to meet with you. Thank god!But I am scared that the Queen is going to find me.

    Red Riding: It should not happen again. Don’t beafraid, my grandmother is much stronger and shehas a lot of power.

    Wolf: Thanks a lot. I will leave there when Iget well.

    Red Riding: You don’t have to leave. I want to have a brotherto play with me, otherwise I will feel very boring.Wolf: I am willing to stayhere if you don’t mind.

    Red Riding: Really? Great!

  • YIP
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    When, Red Riding’s Grandma unlocked the queen magic,and suddenly the wolf was injuried. Queen realized that her magic was unlocked.

    Wolf: I am really grateful for you to save my life, thank you so much

    Queen: You are my servant and want to escape from me so I punished you. Get out!

    Wolf: Please help me; I don’t want to become her servant.

    Grandma: I decided to save wolf, please let him off.

    Queen: The wolf is mine! He can never be released.

    Grandma: (incantation)

    Grandma stopped the clocks and took the injurious wolf to her home. She lived in a small house with her grandson.

    Red Riding was opening the door.

    Red Riding (enters): Grandma, Why you so late? I am hungry

    Grandma: I just save a wolf, help me put him on the bed.

    Red Riding: All right, what happened to him?

    Grandma told the wolf’s fortune while they were having dinner. On

    On the next day, Grandma left home, Red Riding was the first time talking to the wolf.

    Red Riding: Good morning

    Wolf: Good morning, and who are you?

    Red Riding: I am Grandma’s grandson, nice to meet you.

    Wolf: I am too hungry; can you give me some foods?

    Red Riding: Yes, of course. Last night we had some foods left

    Wolf: What is this, it's tasty

    Red Riding: This is the chicken! I didn't think you had ever eaten before?

    Wolf: Yes, I had never eaten before.

    Wolf: Do you feel boring? Let us play the card game.

    Red Riding: That’s a good idea !

    After wolf finished eating, then they started to play the card game.

    Wolf: That’s funny! You lose again!

    Red Riding: You are so lucky!

    Wolf: Yes, I feel lucky that your grandmother saved me so I can meet you. Thanks God! But I'm scare that queen is coming find me.

    Red Riding: That'll never happen again, don’t be afraid of; because my grandmother has such a stronger and special power.

    Wolf: Thanks a lot. When I get well, I will leave here.

    Red Riding: You can't leave, I still want a partner to play with me. As I feel boring here.

    Wolf: If you don’t mind, I am willing to stay here as long as you wish.

    Red Riding: Really? I'm glad you do.

    Source(s): Partly according to The Advanced Learner Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation by Oxford University Press in 1975
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    7 years ago

    Then, Red Riding’s Grandma unlocked the queen magic but the wolf was injury. Queen realized that her magic was unlocked.

    Wolf: I appreciate you to save my life. Thank you so much.

    Queen: Who are you? He is my servant and he wanted to escape so I punished him. Get out!

    Wolf: Please help me; I don’t will to become her servant.

    Grandma: I decide to save wolf. Please let him off.

    Queen: The wolf is mine! He never releasing.

    Grandma: (incantation)

    Grandma stops the clocks and takes the injurious wolf to her home. She lived in a small house with her grandson.

    Red Riding was opening the door.

    Red Riding (enters): Grandma, Why you so late? I am hungry.

    Grandma: I had just save a wolf. Help me to put him on the bed.

    Red Riding: All right. What happened with him?

    Grandma told the wolf’s matter while they was having the dinner.

    After next day, Grandma left home. Red Riding first time contacts with the wolf.

    Red Riding: Good morning.

    Wolf: Good morning. Who are you?

    Red Riding: I am Grandma’s grandson. Nice to meet you.

    Wolf: I am too hungry. Can you give me some food?

    Red Riding: Yes, sure. We had some food last night.

    Wolf: What is this food? It is tasty.

    Red Riding: This is chicken! You haven’t eaten?

    Wolf: Yes, I have not eaten this food.

    Wolf: Do you feel bored? Let us play card game.

    Red Riding: That’s good idea!

    After wolf eating, they play card game.

    Wolf: That’s funny! You lose again!

    Red Riding: You are so lucky!

    Wolf: Yes, I feel lucky that your grandmother saved me and I can meet you. Thanks god but I scare that queen is coming to find me.

    Red Riding: Not happen your cases again. Don’t be afraid. My grandmother is much stronger and she has a lot of power.

    Wolf: Thanks a lot. When I get well, I will leave here.

    Red Riding: You can’t leave. I still want to have a brother to play with me. At this place, I feel bored.

    Wolf: If you don’t mind, I am willing to stay here certainly.

    Red Riding: Really? I hope so.

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