Does this poem make sense?

I need to write a poem for my Spanish Cultural Assignment. Does it make sense?

Yo espero para tú con pasión

Añoro para tú con dolor

Cada día, la rosa se marchita

Robado de su color

En la luz y la oscuridad

Y cuándo la tierra florece

La primavera la excluye

Todavía la rosa muere

Mi amor, lo siento

invierno empeza

nieve cubre tú

y esconde tu belleza

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  • 7 years ago
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    It's good, and makes sense, just a couple of grammatical issues:

    1st line: Yo te espero con pasión

    2nd line: Añoro por ti con dolor

    4th line: robada needs to be feminine, to match la rosa

    3rd stanza, 2nd line: empieza (you left out the i)

    3rd stanza, 3rd line: nieve te cubre

    that's it, good job

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  • 7 years ago

    Not really find a spanish person

    Source(s): Me
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