What do you think of this?

For the life of me I don't know why I keep reposting this, or why it keeps getting deleted, I am considering quitting this site over this because YA staff has shown me through their replies that they haven't even looked at my question but here we go.

Let me know what you think and any and all criticism (positive or negative) will be greaty appreciated

Also, the poem was originally intended not to rhyme, but I threw in a small improper rhyme, this is the first time I have ever used one so let me know what you think...

Little Things

It's the little things

The ones that no one notice

That are special things

And part of who we are

It's the careful things

The ones give our focus

That remember things

As imprints of our past

It's the different things

With their different thoughts of purpose

That make bigger things

So unique from all the rest

They're important things

For without them we'd be helpless

It's the little things

That make us who we are

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also, if you like it, please give it a star, there are so few replies on this section I do like to get a good amount of feedback

Also, this is a repost, I know, I just want to get as many opinions as possible,

thanks again

1 Answer

  • 8 years ago
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    This was good

    And good is good

    I liked it :)

    Its short- to the point- and no complex metaphors that you really dont fully understand- and your little bit of slant rhyme was good :)

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