Valentine's poem for Jack and Jill ...?
Will Jack ever have his Jill ?
If he swept away the cloud's
Stopped all the rain
Kissed her like the sun
Hugged her like the waves
Healed her like a storm
On a cold winters night
And under the pine-wood
Down a grassy path
Would he tell his Jill
That there love would always last
He is weak from his love-less-ness .................. ( New Wordy )
His eye's are filled with loneliness
He feels only hopelessness
Will Jack ever have his happiness ?
Will he ever have his Jill ?
I guess he never will.
- Anonymous7 years agoBest Answer
I honestly like this, Caz
it is fun and it is good, and I say that honestly,
but then my good meter is different than some others,
to me, it is correct.
and I have been jacked around enough to never mind and accept that I am one, not two combined,
as my Jack or Jim or Jude or John is not available here or online
- autumlovrLv 77 years ago
What an imaginative twist to an old nursery rhyme .... great fun, I love it Caz!
Maybe it's Jill can't find her Jack
because she's always looking back,
back at things that might have been
and Jack moved on to another friend?
Takes two to miss
and two to find
just depends what each
has in mind.
Star crossed lovers they may be
or just out of luck and destiny
Jack and Jill may have lost their glory
but they live on in their own sad story.