Ashley asked in 社會與文化語言 · 8 years ago

請幫我改英文文法~急!!!!

我媽媽的同事送我一包超好吃的餅乾,媽媽要我用英文表達謝意~

以下是我寫的:

Thank you for your cookies. I like them very much, they taste devine,haha xd

I had a wonderful afternoon with the cookies and a cup of good tea just like you suggested . I really appreciate !

幫我修改文法或是幫我加一些更好的詞~

謝謝喔 ^_^

Update:

我有點想加"謝謝妳每一年都有買給我" 因為她每年都記得買給我餅乾;)

如果覺得不適合就算了,謝謝:)

1 Answer

Rating
  • 8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    ---Error and correction in English Grammar---

    ----Thank you for your cookies.

    As you're mom's colleague in the Company,

    I fully appreciate it and

    value the gift's taste over a period of time.

    I accept this gift in appreciation of all you've given for us.

    It is a work of food-art!

    They taste devine as if coming and sending from God!

    I had a wonderful afternoon with mom with the cookies and cups of Ceylon tea just as you suggested!

    I fully appreciate it again!

Still have questions? Get your answers by asking now.