promotion image of download ymail app
Promoted

中翻英的句子對不對?

從全球經濟發展來看,製造業有著重要的角色地位,其產業群聚現象、產業結構變遷、空間以及競爭力的探究一直是各國政府與企業的重要議題之一。

From the perspective of the development of the global economy, the manufacturing sector has an important role status, the industry cluster phenomenon, industrial structure changes, space, and competitiveness explore has been one of the important issues of the governments and enterprises.

5 Answers

Rating
  • 8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    To Inoui大,

    我不認為這是翻軟的傑作,如果是的話也未免太強了吧!

    咪大,也讓Panda try try ㄅ!

    事實上您寫得真的不錯,只有些許的小錯,我會盡可能將句子保有原來的風貌。

    ( )裏為不必要的字,寬體底線為修改過的字,如下:

    從全球經濟發展來看,製造業有著重要的角色地位,其產業群聚現象、產業結構變遷、空間以及競爭力的探究一直是各國政府與企業的重要議題之一。

    From the perspective of (the development of) the global economy's development, the manufacturing sector has an important role/status.

    *原來的perspective of XXXXX of 感覺太饒舌,所以稍微移了一下讀起來就通順多了。

    *在句子裡,role跟status擔任著類似的角色,所以不宜擺在一起,除非用 / 隔開,表示可替換。

    Its exploration on industry cluster phenomenon, industrial structure changes, space, and competitiveness (explore) has always been one of the most important issues of the governments and enterprises worldwide.

    * 用名詞"exploration"來取代"explore"並將其移到句首來修飾後句的 "one of the most important issues"。

    *句尾多加了 "worldwide"來修飾前面複數的 "governments"。

    整合如下:

    From the perspective of the global economy's development, the manufacturing sector has an important role/status. Its exploration on industry cluster phenomenon, industrial structure changes, space, and competitiveness has always been one of the most important issues of the governments and enterprises worldwide.

    整體感覺起來順多了!

    學英文不只背單字記文法,邏輯也很重要。

    Hope it helps!

    2013-01-13 00:22:35 補充:

    Its = 它的

    It's = It is 的縮寫

    Source(s): Eat, drink, and sleep English
    • Commenter avatarLogin to reply the answers
  • 8 years ago

    Perspective from the global economy, the manufacturing sector has an important role, its industrial cluster phenomenon, changes in industry structure, space research and competitiveness has always been one of the important issues for Governments and business.

    • Commenter avatarLogin to reply the answers
  • inoui
    Lv 6
    8 years ago

    從全球經濟發展來看,製造業有著重要的角色地位,其產業群聚現象、產業結構變遷、空間以及競爭力的探究一直是各國政府與企業的重要議題之一。

    # 你po的英譯句一看就是翻譯軟體(?)

    很多句子都很直譯怪怪的,我的解答如下,請參考

    # Inthe terms of global economic development, manufacturer has long played thecrucial role. Its industrial clustering, industrial structure transformation,space and competitiveness research has been one of the important issues amonggovernments and enterprises.

    2013-01-09 16:12:30 補充:

    奇怪,我打的空格怎都沒跑出來> <

    斟酌原句意後,修改為

    In the terms of global economic development, manufacturer plays the crucial role. Its industrial clustering, industrial structure transformation, space and competitiveness research has been one of the important issues among governments and enterprises internationally.

    2013-01-12 15:20:36 補充:

    Hi Mr.Panda

    Like the uses of economy's, manufacturing sector, role status, competitiveness explore are the obvious mistakes that should be awared by the writer, and comparing to the 中文 sentence, the problem all caused from the DIRECT translation.

    2013-01-12 15:21:12 補充:

    Actually you can use Google translator to testify why I would make such presumption.

    Thanks for your reminder, If any offenses to MimiJong, I am sorry.

    Source(s): 腦袋,我的, 補丁, 腦袋, 腦袋
    • Commenter avatarLogin to reply the answers
  • 8 years ago

    從全球經濟發展的角度來看,製造業有重要作用地位、 產業集群現象、 產業結構變化、 空間和競爭力探索一直是各國政府和企業的重要問題之一

    英文的

    意思是一樣的

    所以是對的!!!

    Source(s):
    • Commenter avatarLogin to reply the answers
  • How do you think about the answers? You can sign in to vote the answer.
  • 8 years ago

    From the perspective of the development of global economy, the manufacturing sector plays an important role. The industry cluster phenomenon, industry structural changes, space, and competitiveness exploration have always been one of the important issues of governments and enterprises.

    • Commenter avatarLogin to reply the answers
Still have questions? Get your answers by asking now.