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What do you think about these lyrics I wrote...?(:?

Give me SUGGESTIONS,(: I'm only 13 soo..

Im going crazy

It was the day you sat next to me,

I fell in love with that smile, and those eyes

It was all a bit blurry,

And I was scared of what you'd think.

But now I'm,

Thinking bout you all day,

Dreamin bout you at night,

Can't get you outta my head,

And if I had to guess, I'd say, I'm going crazyy

No one understands,

How I feel about you.

They say I don't know what I'm talking bout.

That I'm not the kind of girl your into

But now I'm,

Thinking bout you all day,

Dreamin bout you at night,

Can't get you outta my head,

And if I had to guess, I'd say, I'm going crazyy

You have quite the reputation,

For breaking girls hearts.

I know the mess im getting into,

But I can't look back now,

Cuz I've been,

Thinking bout you all day,

Dreamin bout you at night,

Can't get you outta my head,

And if I had to guess, I'd say, I'm going crazyy

You are the one I wanna,

Spend the rest of my life with.

If you just give me one chance,

I'd prove to you,

That I'm not like the others .

But now I'm,

Thinking bout you all day,

Dreamin bout you at night,

Can't get you outta my head,

And if I had to guess, I'd say, I'm going crazyy

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    Lv 5
    8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Sounds like the Kylie Minogue song:

    "I just can't get you out of my head

    Boy your lovin' is all I think about

    I just can't get you out of my head

    Boy it's more than I dare to think about"

  • 8 years ago

    That is really good! But honestly my friend wrote a song exactly like it with just a bit different wording. These songs all end up sounding like each other and her's is just like that and already on youtube. Maybe make it a completely different beat and pitch inwhich you sing it, tweak the words a bit.

  • 8 years ago

    its really good i would just change the 'dreamin bout you at night' to 'dreamin bout you all night' ;)

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