What is wrong with the punctuation here?

Late at night I didn’t want to take my car out and wake up the quiet neighborhood, so I’d roll up a joint in my room, go outside, and peacefully burn it in the backyard.

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  • Dawn
    Lv 5
    8 years ago

    Late at night,

    You need the comma for the introductory phrase.

  • 8 years ago

    That you smoked it outside. You could of just stayed in your bedroom.

  • 8 years ago

    whats the whole point there is no main point

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