Friend is a bad writer how do I tell him?
He just doesn't make sense most of the time and like it sounds pretintious the way he writes I think he tries to sound smart this is the poem:
→ Nov 2012
so long as the crescent hides behind her walls
and the dreary sets of wandering eyes
falls flat and dead to everyone
you are nothing but grace
and perfection, tinged by shame
and lust for life
how do I tell he's not that good at writing
- SweetandSassyLv 48 years agoFavorite Answer
Your friend has a unique way of expressing himself. I liked it actually. Was it Ralph Waldo Emerson who said, "A man marches to the beat of his own drum, however measured or far away,"? Whose to say your friend is wrong...if people can read his work and relate?
- Anonymous8 years ago
I don't think it's *pretentious* maybe he's just found a way to express himself, and it's out of your league.
Aren't friends supposed to be happy for each other???
- 8 years ago
That's actually pretty good. You should remember that everyone has their own preferences. What seems bad to you may seem brilliant to others.Source(s): Me, Myself and I
- 8 years ago
Well it doesnt sound bad...notice how hes using descrptive terms (epithet) and many similies ?
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- May HemLv 48 years ago
Don't tell him. Let someone else do the criticism.