What do you think of this poem I wrote?
Down from the cold bed
Still I have to check
Wether or not I made it out in one piece
I can't quite remember what was said
I'm not dead at least
Motivation in moments and minutes
Suffering from a shortage of serotonin
I'm making progress, only hinting it
Still I stumble away back to bed
I'm in outer space,
I finally feel at peace and in place
I can hear my foot steps in step once again
Leave prints in pairs and its fine
I'm awake again, I'm alive.
- ?Lv 58 years agoFavorite Answer
I understand it and I think it is okay ...
(((Please ignore that 1st persons ugly statement)))
I know about the shortage of serotonin ...
I think it shows courage ...
It explains the struggle ...
It is an honest insight into mental disorder ...
The concept crosses a border ...