What do you think of this poem I wrote?


Down from the cold bed

Still I have to check

Wether or not I made it out in one piece

I can't quite remember what was said

I'm not dead at least


Motivation in moments and minutes

Suffering from a shortage of serotonin

I'm making progress, only hinting it

Still I stumble away back to bed


I'm in outer space,

I finally feel at peace and in place

I can hear my foot steps in step once again

Leave prints in pairs and its fine

I'm awake again, I'm alive.

1 Answer

  • ?
    Lv 5
    8 years ago
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    I understand it and I think it is okay ...

    (((Please ignore that 1st persons ugly statement)))

    I know about the shortage of serotonin ...

    I think it shows courage ...

    It explains the struggle ...

    It is an honest insight into mental disorder ...

    The concept crosses a border ...

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