Me asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

What do you think of my poem?

Please critique and interpret it? xD

I want to see what you think

and how you interpret it like.

Expiration Date

Stale crackers

left untouched,

inhale the

musty air and such.

Once full of flavor,

now tasteless to

the tongue.

Appealing to the eyes,

yet left to disappoint.

Way past its

expiration date.

No more

satisfaction

remains.

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  • 8 years ago
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    Nicely shared some good thoughts here. I can catch the things you intended to share and it's interesting.

    Keep it up :)

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