Will you care to read and c/c one new poem of the Greek poet?
Time was when I waited for you - in gale;
among the clouds I returned to share,
the vented blue horizons of solar flare,
cause I had a choice to expand or fail.
And it was a choice we both consented,
one caress - your tips - tender on face,
when fates cared our threads to trace,
for you were my solitude ever extended.
as dusk descended gray upon the moors,
I saw you elevating - upstanding maiden,
a form of sacred above my dark burden,
in river Acheron and my pain that cures.
There were dances with forms diffused,
extended to aboves - expended to skies,
were my spirits - cared death to demise,
eligibly alive I was amid calls bemused.
Wraiths of solitude and horizon's lines,
in paths exclusive, amid paeans I arrive,
with cellars of red shed to parade drive,
where life of eighteen, unfolded shines.
© Giorgio Veneto 07-29-2012, All Rights Reserved
Correction : S4 L3 : "where my spirits - ..."
- Anonymous8 years agoFavorite Answer
ahh 18, good year. poem is very rythmic.. quite enjoyable.
- barffLv 44 years ago
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