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Instruction: This contains 35 intentional errors. Place the revision(s) in parentheses. Enclosed are a list of current trips and other information, that you requested about our kayak tours in Alaska. To ensure a quality wilderness experience we limit the number of guests on a tour to six people. No special... show more Instruction: This contains 35 intentional errors. Place the revision(s) in parentheses.

Enclosed are a list of current trips and other information, that you requested about our kayak tours in Alaska. To ensure a quality wilderness experience we limit the number of guests on a tour to six people. No special experience is necessary. Many of our guests have never been in a sea kayak, and are surprised to find that kayaks are very stable. Of course we teach all our guests safe efficient operation of a kayak.

All equipment, meals and safety gear is included in the trip price. We provide charter transportation from Juneau to the trip location, however you are responsible for getting to Juneau, and for your meals and lodging before and after the trip. To reserve a trip you must make a 50 percent deposit. We will hold reservations for your party for two weeks. Anyone who must request a refund, will be charged a $50 handling fee. If we must cancel a trip a full refund will be made. In a few rare instances we must cancel because of to few participants, or dangerous weather.

Our most popular trip is whale watching and kayaking at Pt. Adolphus. This four day trip costs $750 which includes complimentary harbor charter and ferry fees. We also recommend the glacier tour at Tracy Arm, and our island tour of Pt. Couverdon. By the way custom dates is available for familys or groups, however these custom trips are not available for less then four people.

Call write or fax to make your reservation's. My coworkers and myself look forward to provide you with the wilderness adventure of you're life!

Thanks in advance!
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