Thoughts on this song?

Question

http://songwriter.fm/portfolio/she-feels-much-bett...

Update:

Just click on the pink play button :)

Answer 1

Hey cool! I wrote this song!

I was going through a breakup at the time. This just kind of came out one night. I made a rough demo here:

http://soundcloud.com/davidjhahn/she-feels-much-be...

Then Arthi Meera and Dynamite Ham (Ethan Stoller) in Chicago made the recording you linked to in your original post. I think it turned out great. I love the remix bass stuff they put on the intro.

Source(s): That's my song!

Answer 2

It sounds like a cheap take-off of a Sarah McLachlan song without nearly the vocal, lyrical, and melodic capacity of one of Sarah's.