can you edit and fix this rap?

well can u fix and edit this virse (and finish it)

i love all the cash but sometimes i need to excape

i deal with this at dinner. its just what you leave on your plate

all the issues that you don't deal with,

i was fake but now the realest.

my girl left me cuz i ****** cheated

it was durring our wedding, she looked down than she started leaving

in the first row the other ***** was on the bleachers

finish this **** please

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  • ?
    Lv 4
    9 years ago
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    I love all the cash, but sometimes I need to escape.

    I deal with this at dinner, it's just what you leave on your plate.

    All the issues that you don't deal with,

    I was fake, but now the realest.

    My girl left me, 'cause I f**king cheated.

    It was during our wedding, she looked down, then she started leaving,

    in the first row the other [guy] was on the bleachers

    I don't know how to finish this for you, because I don't know you, or the story that you are attempting to portray in this rap song.

    Source(s): Me
  • jake
    Lv 6
    9 years ago

    There is this thing called meter. Use it.

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