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I grew up surrounded in the company of old farmers blather as they chattered rocking in going nowhere synchronicity. Always told to be silent as they rambled on about weather and crop reports not allowed to offer retorts I teased the seeds of grain that blew from some pickup truck choosing to... show more I grew up surrounded
in the company
of old farmers blather
as they chattered
rocking in going nowhere
synchronicity.

Always told to be silent
as they rambled on
about weather and crop reports
not allowed to offer retorts
I teased the seeds of grain
that blew from some pickup truck

choosing to chase luck and bugs
shutting up and in
who I wanted to be
they wouldn't let me insert
my own verbs or adjectives
into conversations, their objective.

"What can she possibly know?"
Update: TY Tariel, ya already don't like my stuff, why not just leave me alone?
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