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Good morning, dear professors! I am honored to have the opportunity to introduce myself .
My name is ○○○,18 years old,graduating from ..........
I have a happy family with altogether four members including my parents, my sister and me.
I am a positive and responsible person. My habits are reading books and tourism, by these two activities can improve my vision and international outlook. I have free time I will read about the commercial, economic books to enhance my professional knowledge!
I hope the next four years of college can learn to be more deep expertise, in addition to learning more advanced English as well as learning a second foreign language skills, in hopes of future more competitive in the job.
Finally, if I am honored to be able to successfully enter the Feng Chia University, Department of Cooperative Economics , I will do my best to study the undergraduate Department of the relevant expertise to enrich themselves.
Thank you very much for listening!
- 非天使Lv 79 years agoFavorite Answer
Good morning, dear professors! I am honored to have the this opportunity to introduce myself for you .
My name is ○○○,18 years old, graduated from ..........(由何校畢業，須用過去式或過去分詞，不可用現在分詞)
I have a happy family with altogether four members including my parents, my an older or a younger sister and me I.
I am a positive and responsible person, my habits are reading books and tourism going travel, by and through these two activities can improve my vision and international outlook. When I have free time, I will read the books about the commercial, economic etc. books to enhance my professional knowledge!
I hope the next the future four years of in college can learn to be more deep a variety of expertise deeply, in addition to learning more advanced English as well as learning a second foreign language skills, in hopes of that I can be future more competitive in the job in the future.1. The next four years in college, 意思似已在唸大學，接下來的下面4年（好像唸大學不只4年）。2. learn to be 學習去成為（如專家等）
Finally, if I am have the honored to be able to successfully allowed to enter the Feng Chia University, the department of Cooperative Economics of the Feng Chia University , I will do my best to study the relevant expertise in the undergraduate Department of the relevant expertise to enrich themselves raise my level.
2012-06-16 03:14:47 補充：
what do you mean? just show your answer to the page master! why do I feel you guys are so pround?
- Anonymous8 years ago
- prisoner26535Lv 79 years ago
Lame, is the only thing I can say, but I am still looking for 3 other reasons to (or not to) pick you.
Give them to me, dude!
2012-06-16 08:08:52 補充：
this dude is delivering a lame speech in her entrance exam (an important one, I suppose). I am asking her to convince herself, why, she should pick herself, amongst the 485 other applicants.
Of course, the problem is not the English. It is lame, even in TW.