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光軍 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 9 years ago

(緊急)大學推甄英文自我介紹修改

Good morning, dear professors! I am honored to have the opportunity to introduce myself .

My name is ○○○,18 years old,graduating from ..........

I have a happy family with altogether four members including my parents, my sister and me.

I am a positive and responsible person. My habits are reading books and tourism, by these two activities can improve my vision and international outlook. I have free time I will read about the commercial, economic books to enhance my professional knowledge!

I hope the next four years of college can learn to be more deep expertise, in addition to learning more advanced English as well as learning a second foreign language skills, in hopes of future more competitive in the job.

Finally, if I am honored to be able to successfully enter the Feng Chia University, Department of Cooperative Economics , I will do my best to study the undergraduate Department of the relevant expertise to enrich themselves.

Thank you very much for listening!

以上是我的英文自我介紹,有哪一位大大能夠幫我修改並給我建議

以下是中文對照

早上好,親愛的教授!我很榮幸有機會向您作自我介紹。

我的名字是○○○,18歲,畢業於......。

我有一個幸福的家庭共有四名成員,包括我的父母,姐姐和我。

我是一個積極和負責任的人。我的習慣是閱讀的書籍和旅遊,這兩項活動可以提高我的視野和國際觀。當我有空閒的時間,我會讀有關商業、經濟方面的書籍,以提高自己的專業知識!

我希望未來大學四年可以學習更精深的專業知識,另外學習更高階的英語以及學習第二外語能力,希望在今後的工作更有競爭力。

最後,如果我很榮幸能夠順利進入逢甲大學合作經濟學系,我將盡我所能來學習本科系相關的專業知識,充實自己。非常感謝您的聆聽!

非常感謝

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  • 9 years ago
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    暫修正如下,請自行再檢視修正。

    Good morning, dear professors! I am honored to have the this opportunity to introduce myself for you .

    My name is ○○○,18 years old, graduated from ..........(由何校畢業,須用過去式或過去分詞,不可用現在分詞)

    I have a happy family with altogether four members including my parents, my an older or a younger sister and me I.

    I am a positive and responsible person, my habits are reading books and tourism going travel, by and through these two activities can improve my vision and international outlook. When I have free time, I will read the books about the commercial, economic etc. books to enhance my professional knowledge!

    I hope the next the future four years of in college can learn to be more deep a variety of expertise deeply, in addition to learning more advanced English as well as learning a second foreign language skills, in hopes of that I can be future more competitive in the job in the future.1. The next four years in college, 意思似已在唸大學,接下來的下面4年(好像唸大學不只4年)。2. learn to be 學習去成為(如專家等)

    Finally, if I am have the honored to be able to successfully allowed to enter the Feng Chia University, the department of Cooperative Economics of the Feng Chia University , I will do my best to study the relevant expertise in the undergraduate Department of the relevant expertise to enrich themselves raise my level.

    2012-06-16 03:14:47 補充:

    what do you mean? just show your answer to the page master! why do I feel you guys are so pround?

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    哈哈 要喝好喝的奶蓋綠蓋茶

    問我就對了└(^o^)┘

    小弟是逢甲大學4年級觀光系公關,最近跟靜宜大的聯誼,身材面孔都一流(誤)

    在活動中玩了食字路口 喝到這間超好喝的自創品牌奶蓋茶

    而且這間只賣奶蓋喔!比甚麼常去的綠x 奶蓋x好喝太太太太太太多了啦XDDDD

    重點是店員超正的(大誤),又是學姊,不挺一下怎麼行

    有小聊了一下,學姐說是不希望家裡的期盼考公職,所以自己研發了奶蓋茶要證明自己的夢想(感動ING)

    有機會來逢甲一定要去喝看看,而且學姐也是死忠五迷喔 哈哈

    他在文華路的全家對面而已

    真的找不到FB找"蓋世無霜"

    希望這訊息對你有所幫助喔,歡迎常來逢甲玩喔^^

  • 9 years ago

    Lame, is the only thing I can say, but I am still looking for 3 other reasons to (or not to) pick you.

    Give them to me, dude!

    2012-06-16 08:08:52 補充:

    Nay,

    this dude is delivering a lame speech in her entrance exam (an important one, I suppose). I am asking her to convince herself, why, she should pick herself, amongst the 485 other applicants.

    Of course, the problem is not the English. It is lame, even in TW.

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