How are my rap lyrics?

what do you think

Sometimes i feel so empty inside/

even with all my tensions aside/

i start to wonder why im even alive/

just so stressed lately, i might as well blast away at my brain leaving bloodstains that wont wash away/

fed up that no one has my back when push comes to shove/

having nobody to love,im sick of all of the above/

thats why im resorting to dope rhymes/

give it a little time and i might start doing coke lines/

because there's moments i feel like theres NO WAY OUT!/

and everybody just tells me, Your'e OK,.HOW!?

how the f*** can i be ok,when im depressed every day/

please understand that im not joking im really wasting away/

plus im sick of you always askin "man why are you like this?"/

i dont know b****,maybe cuz' of the way that my life is/

and next time you ask trust me your life will be in a crysis/

because inside of me,there's an alterate side of me/

and you've never seen it,i keep it locked down in a cave,chained like a demon/

isolated locked away i wish that you could feel my pain/

ive become a recluse in a nasty mood, im just not the same/

i dont appreciate your friendlt faces coming around anymore cuz' ive changed/

as a matter of fact its because of you that i became this way/

you thought id just forget how you stabbed me in the back/

i was always real with you but i guess you couldn't see that/

sorry,but you cant f*** me over and expect me not to react/

and dont waste your time trying to apologize you cant redeem yourself,in my eyes you'll always be a liar/

Ive come to the point in life where nobody knows me/

i show no emotion back no matter how much anyone shows me/

and even though i choose to be alone, inside i feel lonely.

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  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    SO good.

    Before reading this, I was thinking to myself.. alright, i'm going to give this kid constructive criticism. But, I couldn't come up with anything.. they're really good lyrics.

    Have fun being famous. The demon part is awesome.

  • 4 years ago

    i become listening to the radio and heard this brilliant lyric "I change V playing cards with Retards" Its from each woman by lil wayne i become in wonder that someone could brag about taking income of a retard no longer quite gay

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    I actually really like this :) good writing

  • 9 years ago

    You have talent....nice lyrics

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