How are my rap lyrics?
what do you think
Sometimes i feel so empty inside/
even with all my tensions aside/
i start to wonder why im even alive/
just so stressed lately, i might as well blast away at my brain leaving bloodstains that wont wash away/
fed up that no one has my back when push comes to shove/
having nobody to love,im sick of all of the above/
thats why im resorting to dope rhymes/
give it a little time and i might start doing coke lines/
because there's moments i feel like theres NO WAY OUT!/
and everybody just tells me, Your'e OK,.HOW!?
how the f*** can i be ok,when im depressed every day/
please understand that im not joking im really wasting away/
plus im sick of you always askin "man why are you like this?"/
i dont know b****,maybe cuz' of the way that my life is/
and next time you ask trust me your life will be in a crysis/
because inside of me,there's an alterate side of me/
and you've never seen it,i keep it locked down in a cave,chained like a demon/
isolated locked away i wish that you could feel my pain/
ive become a recluse in a nasty mood, im just not the same/
i dont appreciate your friendlt faces coming around anymore cuz' ive changed/
as a matter of fact its because of you that i became this way/
you thought id just forget how you stabbed me in the back/
i was always real with you but i guess you couldn't see that/
sorry,but you cant f*** me over and expect me not to react/
and dont waste your time trying to apologize you cant redeem yourself,in my eyes you'll always be a liar/
Ive come to the point in life where nobody knows me/
i show no emotion back no matter how much anyone shows me/
and even though i choose to be alone, inside i feel lonely.
- Anonymous9 years ago
Before reading this, I was thinking to myself.. alright, i'm going to give this kid constructive criticism. But, I couldn't come up with anything.. they're really good lyrics.
Have fun being famous. The demon part is awesome.
- willodeanLv 44 years ago
i become listening to the radio and heard this brilliant lyric "I change V playing cards with Retards" Its from each woman by lil wayne i become in wonder that someone could brag about taking income of a retard no longer quite gay
- Anonymous9 years ago
I actually really like this :) good writing
- 9 years ago
You have talent....nice lyrics