Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Family & RelationshipsSingles & Dating · 9 years ago

I need your opinions on this guys/girls?

Im just needing some opinions before I present it to my band to make sure it's not bad :( check out our tumblr for more! (it's kinda dead now but it shall rise!)

I may be down and out

But that's alright 

Because I'm never out for the count 

Never bring a knife to a gun fight.

This is what you wanted 

When shall that bell toll

I've gone insane from this pain

The sky's as dark as coal

Bring me that sweet morphine

Absolute happiness in liquid form

Ambulance sirens, straight lines

Blinding lights, will he be alright?

Tubes, ticking and ties

 straps around my thighs 

When there's nothing to feel

How do you know what's real

I may be down and out

But that's alright 

Because I'm never out for the count 

Never bring a knife to a gun fight.

I have a burning guilt 

Stuck inside this veldt 

I've let you down 

But it's not all over now 

It's not about what you've done

Its about what your doing 

Rise from the ashes

Start a fire without matches

Last mistakes are forgotten 

There is always a reconciliation 

Always a reconciliation.

Tumblr: edgeofextinction.tumblr.com/

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  • 9 years ago

    i really like it!! my only comment is the chorus could be a little longer. the rest is great!

  • 9 years ago

    omgggg this is soooo goodd!!! :D

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    ????????????

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