A cigarette that bares a lips stick's traces?
Airline tickets to romantic places
Foreign words in rhythmic phrases
Strange tinged skies and mystery moons
Desert flowers scenting Junes.
Luggage slammed with postal stickers
Going's fast -- returning's quicker
Mem'ries now of unfold like roadmaps
In between my meals and naps.
- ?Lv 69 years agoFavorite Answer
I think it should be lip stick's traces or lips' stick's traces.
S1L2 - 'Foreign words' feels flat in the mix
S2L3- 'of' is unnecessary
- Anonymous9 years ago
like the first two lines a lot and no time for sleep on the road.