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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

A cigarette that bares a lips stick's traces?

Airline tickets to romantic places

Foreign words in rhythmic phrases

Strange tinged skies and mystery moons

Desert flowers scenting Junes.

Luggage slammed with postal stickers

Going's fast -- returning's quicker

Mem'ries now of unfold like roadmaps

In between my meals and naps.

C/C?

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  • ?
    Lv 6
    9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    I think it should be lip stick's traces or lips' stick's traces.

    S1L2 - 'Foreign words' feels flat in the mix

    S2L3- 'of' is unnecessary

    Loved S2L1

    Great ending

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    like the first two lines a lot and no time for sleep on the road.

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