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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 9 years ago

Would this be an interesting end to my book?

You really don't need to know the plot.

At the end of my book, the king of demons (i will probably find a better title for him) is battling the good guys and the main character ends up hitting a critical part, but before the King dies he uses his last amount of energy to send the main character into the realm of demons. And in the realm of demons, you can't take on human form so he is transformed into some sort of animal or creature. And that's where the second book picks up.

And there he meets the demon who ressurected the "king". And that demon offers him a deal, one that will allow him to escape.

Update:

The demon king isn't hot and in fact i was thinking of making it a girl, or so creature like that you can't even tell what it is anymore. But the demon who ressurected him/her is good looking when he takes on a human form in our world ;)

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  • Anonymous
    9 years ago
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    That's actually a pretty cool ending.

    It's a good way to make a sequel.

    Just a little thingy about what would actually be interesting,

    if a hero would battle the main antagonist (bad guy, main enemy.) and hit a critical spot,

    but then the main antagonist uses his last amount of energy to seal the hero, and for some

    reason he manages to kill off all the other good guys remaining and wins. And then like 10 years later the hero emerges and that would make the first book actually a prequel and the next books would be the actuall story.

  • 9 years ago

    could be interesting....hence the creation of Cerberus (the three headed dog that guards the gates of hell.) his soul must stay there and become the animal- or stay as the animal and he becomes either nicer or a bit nastier, depending on which part of his soul he leaves? Good Luck!

  • 9 years ago

    good ending, but make the demon king HOT!!!!!!!

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    That's sounds great. I would want to read it by the sound of that!

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  • 9 years ago

    That sounds good!

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