? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

Wanting an opinion on one of my poems...?

I don't think I am the best poet out there. But wanting some opinions anyway. This is one of my poems that came to mind one night after my boyfriend putting me down pretty badly.

Dead Inside...

Because of this love

I am dieing

Because of all this hate

I die a little more each day

Because of all this pain

I die even more by the hour

Because of this life

I die some more by the minute

Because of all this

I die more by the second

Because of you

I am dead inside

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  • 9 years ago
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    It's ohkay.

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