Check for any grammar or spelling mistakes? please?

my english is not very good. so could you just check the following text for any grammar and spelling mistakes and tell me what the mistakes exactly are and where they are? thank you ;)

so here is the text:

Slaves in Atlanta, Georgia

In the 17th century many slaves had to come to the USA. The most black slaves form all over the world lived in the USA. Particularly the economy from the southstaates was founded by slavery. The slaves often had to work on cotton or tobacco plantations. The black slaves work in terrible conditions and they are often beaten form their masters. They had to clean forests, wheat and maize sowing( and reaping, and they also work in mines and in the household of their masters. While their work they sing sad songs about the hard work or a better life. They sing songs with rhythm that helped them to do their work. There were schools for white children and schools for black children and the schools for withes were bigger, newer and just better. Black and white people were separate in buses, trains, in restaurants and hostels. They drunk from different sinks and had to wait in separate waitingrooms.

Declaration of independence

The declaration of independence said, that everybody has the same rights, this includes the right to life, liberty and to reach happiness. Some people wanted these rights were for black people too.

In 1808 slave trading was banned. From then the slaves were forced to come illegal.

War against slavery

1733 Georgia was founded. 1788 Georgia became part of the United States. There weren't many Indians in Georgia in that time. After some years many African slaves were taken to the States for unpaid work. They had to work very hard and their masters didn't care for them properly.

The different opinions fromof the slavery the different states lead to the American civil war. Abraham Lincon became president of the USA in 1860. He wanted to stop and abolish slavery. The slave holder notice that as chalange and that Lincon wanted to destroy their existence. Many southstaats, for example Georgia, left the USA and they started a war. The southstaates lost two wars against the USA. Atlanta was taken form the USA. They destroyed the city and the economy.

All this happend, because of slavery and people who are against it.

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  • 8 years ago
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    1st Paragraph:

    southstaates should be: south states

    the brackets should be like this: sowing (and

    Waitingrooms is two words: waiting rooms

    War against Slavery:

    fromof should be two words: From of

    The slave holder notice that as challenge and Lincon wanted to destroy their existence., should be: The slave holders noticed that as a challenge and realised that Lincon wanted to destroy their existence., notice=noticed and chalange=challenge and an a was added and realised was added.

    again southstats should be: South states, Holder changed to: Holders

    form should be: from

    happend should be: happened

    All this happened, because of slavery and people who are against it, could be: All this happened because (no comma here) of the people who were against slavery.

    Other corrections:

    Druck should be: drank

    withes should be: whites

    sings should be: sang

    I think i made some other corrections below but forgot what they were, but they are still in the corrected version below :)

    Here is the full essay with my corrections:

    Slaves in Atlanta, Georgia

    In the 17th century many slaves had to come to the USA. The most black slaves form all over the world lived in the USA. Particularly the economy from the south states was founded by slavery. The slaves often had to work on cotton or tobacco plantations. The black slaves work in terrible conditions and they were often beaten form their masters. They had to clean forests, wheat and maize sowing (and reaping, and they also work in mines and in the household of their masters. While their work they sang sad songs about the hard work or a better life. They sang songs with rhythm that helped them to do their work. There were schools for white children and schools for black children and the schools for whites were bigger, newer and just better. Black and white people were separate in buses, trains, in restaurants and hostels. They drank from different sinks and had to wait in separate waiting rooms.

    Declaration of independence

    The declaration of independence said, that everybody has the same rights, this includes the right to life, liberty and to reach happiness. Some people wanted these rights were for black people too.

    In 1808 slave trading was banned. From then the slaves were forced to come illegal.

    War against slavery

    1733 Georgia was founded. 1788 Georgia became part of the United States. There weren't many Indians in Georgia in that time. After some years many African slaves were taken to the States for unpaid work. They had to work very hard and their masters didn't care for them properly.

    The different opinions from of the slavery the different states lead to the American civil war. Abraham Lincon became president of the USA in 1860. He wanted to stop and abolish slavery. The slave holders noticed that as a challenge and that Lincon wanted to destroy their existence. Many south states, for example Georgia, left the USA and they started a war. The south states lost two wars against the USA. Atlanta was taken from the USA. They destroyed the city and the economy.

    All this happened, because of slavery and people who are against it.

    Hope I helped :)

    Source(s): My Self :)
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  • Chris
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    English always has a capital E

    Georgia. full stop

    Slaves were taken to the USA, they didn't 'have to come'.

    founded 'on' slavery, not 'by', (by 'slave owners' perhaps)

    ...slaves worked in... (past tense) not work

    were often beaten by their masters. ( past " ) not are. They had to clear forests not clean.

    ...also worked in mines (past t. of work) they sang sad songs (past t. of sing)

    They sang...

    They drank ... (past t. of drink)......and had to use separate waiting rooms.

    Declaration of Independence (capitals, - it's a title)

    ....wanted these rights for black people too.

    From then slavery was illegal.

    ..Indians in Georgia at that time......taken to the States to work. (slaves are never paid)

    ... opinions about slavery in the different states.....

    ...to stop slavery and make it illegal. ( stop or abolish, not both)

    ....many southern states for example...(not southstaates)

    ....southern states.........

    ....people who were against it. (past t. of are)

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  • kinnu
    Lv 4
    3 years ago

    there have been somewhat some blunders so i've got rewritten it: expensive mothers and fathers and guardians, thank you for taking the time to come back alongside with us. we actually favored your help by using the progression. the progression would not have been as relaxing and noteworthy without your presence and participation. we decide to deliver our inner maximum appreciation to your help. we are fortunate to have human beings consisting of yourselves that are devoted to convalescing guidance. So right this is our thank you as quickly as returned to your committed help, Brian regular, the letter would not truly sound good. The sentences are all somewhat short, it could be greater advantageous to have greater assorted sentence lengths and platforms. additionally, you stated thank you too many cases. that's greater advantageous in case you're saying what this 'adventure' became into. of course the receiver of the letter is accepted with in spite of the indisputable fact that it might make the letter sound greater actual. Or point out some thing that took place in this 'adventure' that made it so memorable and relaxing.

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