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My Special Experience Y-10 48 Gilbert What do you do when you lose a way and hurt your body on the same time ?My name is Gilbert. Today I will tell you about first time I went to the farm, first time I lose the way and first time I stitched on my body. First, I will tell you first time I went to the farm.... show more My Special Experience Y-10 48 Gilbert What do you do when you lose a way and hurt your body on the same time ?My name is Gilbert. Today I will tell you about first time I went to the farm, first time I lose the way and first time I stitched on my body. First, I will tell you first time I went to the farm. I love animals when I was a child, so my parent and I went to the farm in holiday when I was third grades. There has a lot of kind animals in the farm. I was going crazy at there. Next, I will tell you first time I lose the way. When I was played in the farm with animals, my parent said that they will go to find the restaurant now but I did not heard what they said. When I look back there was no people at here I was really scared and I run every where. Finally, I will talk about first time I stitched on my body. When I was run like a crazy, suddenly I fall down on the flight of the stairs. And I was in a coma. When I was wake I was in the hospital. And I have a three stitched on my left eye brow! I hope you have enjoyed listening to my speech. Now you know all about first time I went to the farm, first time I lose the way and first time I stitched on my body. If you did not you can hit your eye brow by yourself. Thanks for your listening.
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