英文翻譯怎麼翻會更好?

我的名字是XXX,出生於一個經濟狀況普通且幸福的家庭。有一個弟弟,家中排行老大。家父從事農業,家母則是家庭主婦,但從小到大照顧我和弟弟的是外祖父、外祖母。大眾印象裡外祖父母照顧的孫子通常都會被溺愛和寵壞,但我和弟弟在外祖父母的照顧下,反而不會因為我們是他們的孫子而寵我們,從小就教我們做人處事的道理。 My name is XXX, I was born in a economic situation of ordinary and happiness family. I have a little brother, and I am eldest. My father is a farmer and my mother... show more 我的名字是XXX,出生於一個經濟狀況普通且幸福的家庭。有一個弟弟,家中排行老大。...
My name is XXX, I was born in a economic situation of ordinary and happiness family. I have a little brother, and I am eldest. My father is a farmer and my mother is a housewife. But always dependency grow us up are my grandparent when we are little.

我只翻到第三行
文法有誤嗎? 怎麼翻會更好
其他的就不太會翻了
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