Help with my compare/contrast essay please? am i doing this right?

I have to examine the similarities and differences between an essayist and myself. she wrote an essay about growing up native and the racism her and other natives faced. i had a thesis but after reading my teachers example, i feel as if i am not on the right track. i have to brainstorm three elements/concepts that... show more I have to examine the similarities and differences between an essayist and myself. she wrote an essay about growing up native and the racism her and other natives faced. i had a thesis but after reading my teachers example, i feel as if i am not on the right track. i have to brainstorm three elements/concepts that i want to compare and contrast, my thesis mentioned how racism is wrong yet it will never be abolished because different races have been deeply embedded into society. 1 of my three points would be how people from my community have faced racism as well. the second point was to talk about how racism has always existed, and now it also exists through social media, am i on the right track? please someone correct me and tell me where i am wrong. i am not great at writing essays, and i have no one to help me
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