Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

Seascape-----------------?

Seascape by Carey Ball 4-28-2012

Gulls hover over

Crashing waves at the rocky

Volcanic island

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  • Anonymous
    9 years ago
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    Very atmospheric and sensually demanding. All that is missing is the smell of brine and the taste of salt. It is lovely, really.

  • 9 years ago

    Nice scenery

  • 9 years ago

    Very nice, I could use an escape to the sea.

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    as haiku's go

    this one is true to form and

    ...as usual

    too short for me, I kind of like a longer poem but then it would not be a haiku, would it?

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  • 9 years ago

    I commend you for using enjambment in a haiku.and for titling it. good job.

  • 9 years ago

    Few words, many images----good word usage(hover,over)---well done----------------william

    Source(s): gray matter-----------------------clouds?
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