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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 9 years ago

Is this a good idea for a story?

Rachel stevenson is fed up with life. She thinks she's plain, she isn't particularly rich or popular. However, her sadness dissapears when one day, she buys a lottery ticket and wins the lottery. She gets a boyfriend, who is a part time model part time actor and a doctor and lawyer, and they have some kids and they live happily ever after.

Honest opinions please?

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    Well, I wouldn't read it, that's for sure. There is no depth to the story at all.

  • 9 years ago

    really?

    I'm thinking it needs a little work

    character depth would be my first thought and dump the boyfriend

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