New poem! Need some constructive criticism please!?

I've been working on this poem, and something still doesn't feel right. To me, it seems like the second to last stanza should be the last stanza, but I don't want to loose the last stanza.. do ya catch my drift? Is there some way I could make it mesh better? Thanks! All In If you put effort... show more I've been working on this poem, and something still doesn't feel right. To me, it seems like the second to last stanza should be the last stanza, but I don't want to loose the last stanza.. do ya catch my drift?
Is there some way I could make it mesh better?
Thanks!

All In


If you put effort in,

Then you'll get as much out.


You can fly if you try.

Of this, I've no doubt.


If you go for your goals,

And you give it your all


If you still have the will

To get up when you fall


If you can keep going

Even when things get tough


If you can accept losing

Without giving up


If you can push yourself on

And you believe you can do it


You can achieve anything.

That's all there is to it.


If you put yourself "all in",

Then you'll get as much out.


You can succeed if you try.

Of this, I've no doubt.
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