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Anonymous asked in Education & ReferencePrimary & Secondary Education · 9 years ago

Can anyone check my grammar,grammatical mistakes and sentence structure please?

With reference to your email regarding the payment of the two Grinding wheels, We would like to inform you that we have finished all procedure to send the order for all quantity of diamond tools according to your offer R313-2 in normal terms of payment, including the payment for the two items. In case if you want to the advance payment for two items, We will payment it but at the same time we will cancel this order. We hope on doing more business transaction with you in the future so we will let you decide to regard this issue.

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    With reference to your e-mail, regarding the payment of the two Grinding Wheels, We would like to inform you that we have finished all the procedures to send the order for all your quantity of diamond tools, according to the offer R313-2, with normal terms of payment. This also includes the payment for the two items. In case you want to advance the payment[for the two items] we shall payment it, yet, cancel the original order. We hope to do business with you again in the future.

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