What do you think about my novel idea and other questions about it?
my idea for the opening: so i wanted to start with random voices saying things for one page and ending it with someone saying "die,die,die." it's only one page and it's only there to make the goal stand out. for the next chapter i introduce Emma at her mother's funeral and the second line is "die, die,die" but it sounds funnier because she's interrupting her aunts emotional heartfelt, eulogy because she's playing black ops on her phone.
1.what do you think of this idea?
2. what do you think of the opening? any better ideas?
3.would you read it?
4.do you like the title?
5. do you think this idea is too risky for agents or publishers to be interested in it?
other notes or comments
thanks you guys.