TEENS: What do you think of this ......?

It was an amazing ride

The lights shined because of you and me

Bless the magic we created

All frowns we turned upside down

The breathtaking moments we lived

Laughter filling the bitter air

Promise me you'll stay forever

But if fate steps in

And pushes a goodbye in our direction

Please visit our memories with your children

Tell them my name

And that they'll shine brighter than you and I

Long live that beautiful smile on your face

I had the time of my life with you

And hope you did too

Please be honest. Okay and any tips is greatly appreciated. Thanks!! (it's for my friend btw)

Update:

Lol the poem is based off the song but in my own perspective and words ;)

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  • Anonymous
    9 years ago
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    That's beautiful!!

  • 9 years ago

    Good! It does remind me a little of "Long Live" by Taylor Swift, though :P

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