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Junior MasterChefThe first web site I want to analyze is the official site of “Junior MasterChef Australia 2011”. I noticed this web site because the television program “Junior MasterChef”. The advertisement of this web site came out at the end of program through the host.This web site should be put by the television company, to be more specific, the group who in charge of this program. They are trying to attract people who are interest in eating or cooking and they can search recipes on this web site.Moreover, the web site could be one kind of advertisement in order to increase the audiences rating of “Junior MasterChef”. People might know this web site through other web sites, for instance, Coles or some cooking web site. Through this way, people will know the “Junior MasterChef” program and they might go to watch the program on television if they are interest in. On the top of home page, there is a row of buttons which were the portraits of competitors. The portrait will become bigger and colorful while the mouse staying on one of them, but others changes to dim. It shows a short description about that person as well. People could discover the link easily through the change. Each of portrait can link to his or her personal page which including some simple introduction about their selves and information of the records of competitions. Audiences and fans can also leave massaging to support their favorite chefs. There is one page about voting, callers can decision which dish they prefer.In addition, there is a search window on the right of home page, visitors can type any three of ingredients then the search engine will find dishes which involve those three ingredients. I like this design as it could be very useful and convenient.

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    The first website I want to analyze is the official site of “Junior MasterChef Australia 2011”. I noticed this website because of the television program “Junior MasterChef”, where the (website) address was read out by the host at the end of the program.This website is thought to be created and posted by the television company, to be more specific, the group who is in charge of this program. They are trying to attract people who are interested in eating or cooking and they can search recipes on this website.Moreover, the website could be a kind of advertisements to increase the audience ratings of “Junior MasterChef”. People might be aware of this website through other websites such as the Coles or other cooking websites. Therefore, people would be aware of the “Junior MasterChef” and they might go and watch the program on television if they are interested in it.On the top of the home page, there is a row of buttons which the images are black and white photos of the competitors. When pointing your mouse(cursor) over any one of the buttons, the photo will become bigger and colored, with/while others becoming dimmer. It shows a short description about that person as well. Such effects make it easier for people to know which button they are clicking on. To browse the personal page of a contestant, simply click on his/her photo button. The personal page includes a simple introduction of the contestant, and what they have achieved in the competitions. People are also welcome to leave messages to support their favorite chefs. There is also a page that has all the voting information needed, therefore callers can decide which dish they prefer.In addition, there is a search window on the right hand side of the home page, visitors can type in the names of any three ingredients, then the search engine will find the recipes of the dishes which involve those three ingredients. I like this design as it could be very useful and convenient.

    因為字數過多,所以只能刪掉註解部份。我會另外寄份詳細的註解給你。

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