What flaws could i add to these characters or are they good the way they are?

Alexis Holt:Middle Name: Belle Hair Color: Medium blonde Eye Color: Pale blue Skin Color: medium tan Personality: She’s kind of a bubble brain at times and easily earn the nickname ‘Blondie’ sometimes. She’s very confident in herself, but she also has a tendency to be too honest and hurt people, and she has a... show more Alexis Holt:Middle Name: Belle
Hair Color: Medium blonde
Eye Color: Pale blue
Skin Color: medium tan
Personality: She’s kind of a bubble brain at times and easily earn the nickname ‘Blondie’ sometimes. She’s very confident in herself, but she also has a tendency to be too honest and hurt people, and she has a rep to be a player when it comes to guys. She also tends to be very mean when she’s angry, but she can also be very sweet when it comes to getting what she wants.
Hair Style/Length: Wavy or straight, side swept bangs, down to her mid-back, usually in a high ponytail, or let loose, headbands usually worn around her forehead when it’s loose (her signature style)
Height: 5’5
Figure: Athletic (skinny, 90 pounds, but muscular)
Clothing Style: Tops: Lace Camisoles, off the shoulder tops, tiered camisoles, bandeau tops, tube tops, one shoulder tops; Bottoms: skinny jeans, short shorts, mini-skirts; and Jackets: zip up hoodies


Nicole Peters:
Middle Name: Maria
Hair Color: Medium dark brown
Eye Color: Chocolate brown
Skin Color: light tan
Personality: She is very smart and usually corrects Lexi when she’s wrong, she’s the one that gave Lexi the nickname ‘Blondie’ although she loses her brain when she’s around cute guys. She can be mean at times, although not as much as Lexi, but she also tends to have a calmer side that she shows to everyone but her friends. She will stand up for her friends, although they usually don’t need it, she’s more passive than her other friends and doesn’t like to cause drama
Hair Style/Length: Curls down to her shoulders, usually loose or in a low ponytail
Height: 5’6
Figure: Curvy (100 pounds)
Clothing Style: Tops: Lace tops, graphic tees, tank top; Bottoms: jeans, Bermuda shorts, capris; and Jackets: bomber jackets


Erica Voss:
Middle Name: Lorena
Hair Color: Dark auburn
Eye Color: Forest Green
Skin Color: light tan
Personality: She is very courageous and isn’t afraid to stand up for herself. But she loves to hang out with her friends and show her humorous side. She can turn almost anything into some kind of a joke. She can also be very mean, but only when she’s with Lexi or Nicole, when they aren’t around she’s sweet and kind.
Hair Style/Length: Straight, down to her shoulders, usually loose or braided.
Height: 5’6
Figure: Curvy (105 pounds)
Clothing Style: Tops: graphic tees, off the shoulder tops, tank tops, halter tops; Bottoms: skinny jeans, Bermuda shorts, capris; and Jackets: pullover hoodies

The story is about these three girls that go away to a summer camp they end up each meeting a 'new' friend that ends up starting to tear the friendship apart...these girls got along well but their 'new' friends spread lies about the others to try and separate them... the camp is summer long
Update: Oops. Forgot the girls are 13, and i'll make them more in depth in the book and probably give the characters more adversity as the story goes on
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