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我是怕我寫錯時態之類的~麻煩英文高手~謝謝!

心得報告:我看到這篇文章主角近百歲了雖然身體已漸漸年老,但是她一心想學習的精神讓我佩服,如同現在的我們,我們班上也是有年紀較大的同學,他們為了想完成學業或夢想而來這裡學習,有的學生還大老遠從南投、新竹、彰化…等地方過來上課,我一樣佩服。我也是已經30歲了,是個輕熟女了,學歷只有專科畢業。我一直想完成學士的學位,所以我從彰化來到這裡求學,讀我喜歡的科目”英文”。我一定要學好它,不會放棄它的。我也很高興能認識很多志同道合的朋友。 英文心得:I saw this article lead nearly hundred years old, although her body was gradually old, but she wanted to study wholeheartedly the spirit lets me admire, it is similar to present's we, in our class also has a senior schoolmate, they want to complete the education or the dream come here to study, some students are also very far away from Nantou, Hsinchu, Zhanghua…and other places come to attend class, I admire equally. I was also already thirty years old and a young successful fashion lady, my degree was just the college of technology. I always wanted to complete bachelor's degree, therefore I arrived at here from Zhanghua to study and read the subject which I liked” English”, I certainly must learn it, and I don’t give up it. I am also very pleased to make friends with some like-minded people.

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  • 8 years ago
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    你好

    今天看到你的中文文章,所以就想練習一下英文作文

    這是我的翻譯:

    Even though the main character of this article i read is nearly a hundred years old, her spirit to study wholeheartedly despite her age inspired me. Similar to us in the present, seniors can be seen in classes and schools, all for the purpose of getting educated or to fulfill their dreams despite of their locations of living, which may be located in Nantou, Hsinchu, Zhanghua...and other remote places. I admired their ambitions to learn.

    I am a mature lady of 30 with a degree of only college of technology. It has been my dream to acquire a bachelor degree, so that is the reason i'm here in Zhanghua: to study my favorite subject, English. I will not give up. I will definitely become proficient at master it.

    I am also very pleased to make friends with some like-minded people.

    之前的文章有些文法錯誤,如果你打算用自己的,那也當然可以:

    I saw this article lead nearly hundred years old, although her body was gradually old, but (although 後面不能加but) she wanted to study wholeheartedly the spirit lets me admire(lets me admire改成inspire me). It is similar to present's we(present's we 改成 us in the present). In our class also has a senior schoolmate,(schoolmate 加 -s) they want to complete the education or the dream come here to study;(用;來連接independent 句子) some students are also very far away from Nantou, Hsinchu, Zhanghua…and other places come to attend class, I admire (add object) equally.I was(你現在是還是以前是? use "am") thirty years old and a young successful fashion(fashion=流行) lady with a degree of just college of technology. I've always wanted to complete bachelor's degree, therefore I arrived here from Zhanghua to study and read the subject which I liked: English. I certainly must(certainly must 改成 will do my best to) learn it, and I won’t(=will not) give up. (give up就可以了) I am also very pleased to make friends with some like-minded people.

    加油啦!! 學英文的重點就是閱讀,讀越多,英文就越好喔 ;)

    或者在國外留學...

    另外,當英文到下一階段後,盡量不要直接中翻英,因為文法會錯一些

    很高興幫你解答,我自己也練習了一下,所以我也在此謝謝你。

    Source(s): 自己
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