Is it a haiku? please read my political poem-c/c & add a title?
death in battle
much I had,in my account
- autumlovrLv 78 years agoBest Answer
well not exactly.
Haiku is supposed to be 5 syllable beats on the first line, 7 on the 2nd line, and then 5 again on the third line.
Yours is 4,7 and 7. Kinda not so much a haiku. Nice try though.
- lovechildLv 78 years ago
Did you know that there was once a new type of poem similar to haiku but it was a Buk'Fuhku?
I read it in the archives
been really missin the old days.
- AnnLv 44 years ago
This is truly a special gift. No, Santa is not part of nature, but of the season we celebrate; not the reason, of course. I like Bruce's C&C of the individual haiku's. I love the whole, but my favorite is too darned hard to pick out. Isn't zephyr your haiku and scifaiku name? I'm sure it is. It isn't an arcane word, just rarely used, but it is absolutely correct in the haiku. Thank you and may you have the most wonderful Christmas of all. .
- Anonymous8 years ago
My expense account
Death in battle.
Americanization is seven syllables so goes on line 2.
Interesting that your poems are usually so condensed as to be indecipherable and yet when a poem REQUIRES condensation you become long-winded. Hmm
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- Yesu BenLv 78 years ago
it's a "haik" (haiku without the u) but a good poem nonetheless.
- FunkyMonkeyLv 68 years ago
Close enough for me. Call it "F-haiku"
- MTR 2.0Lv 78 years ago
bank of americanization?
- jennyLv 78 years ago
spell check likes neither.