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Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicLyrics · 9 years ago

Boyfriend wrote me a song.Tell me what you think?

So my boyfriend wrote me a song he said it came out from he's heart.lol tell me the truth about it.no lies.I think it was the cutest song ever<3.[Where did you come from.did you fall from the stars.did you swim from the sea.cause your the treasure that I seek.whenever I close my eyes and fall asleep your the one that's next to me.always will stay true and will be the girl for me that's what I believe.I will never hurt you or desieve you.cause your my honey and in the bee](:

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  • 9 years ago
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    I wish the rhyming structure was more exciting, but the song seems sweet :)

    Source(s): personal sap
  • 9 years ago

    Needs more original words. Typical love ballad . Sounds like something I read in readers digest. Too typical. Keep writing I am sure you will hit on something really good.

  • 9 years ago

    Hah that's pretty good, I like the last line

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    Does it really matter how it sounds to us?

    After all he clearly wrote it for you.

    Source(s): Love is complicated.
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