Boyfriend wrote me a song.Tell me what you think?
So my boyfriend wrote me a song he said it came out from he's heart.lol tell me the truth about it.no lies.I think it was the cutest song ever<3.[Where did you come from.did you fall from the stars.did you swim from the sea.cause your the treasure that I seek.whenever I close my eyes and fall asleep your the one that's next to me.always will stay true and will be the girl for me that's what I believe.I will never hurt you or desieve you.cause your my honey and in the bee](:
- 9 years agoFavorite Answer
I wish the rhyming structure was more exciting, but the song seems sweet :)Source(s): personal sap
- ghost hunterLv 59 years ago
Needs more original words. Typical love ballad . Sounds like something I read in readers digest. Too typical. Keep writing I am sure you will hit on something really good.
- 9 years ago
Hah that's pretty good, I like the last line
- Anonymous9 years ago
Does it really matter how it sounds to us?
After all he clearly wrote it for you.Source(s): Love is complicated.