Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceHomework Help · 9 years ago

whats a good thesis statement when doing a Profile Essay about a nursing home!?

i am to write a profile essay on a nursing home i attended! please help me i need a strong one. my 3 body paragraphs will b about 1. The environment for senior citizens. 2. entertainment(activities) 3.the people in the nursing home!

thanks ill appreciate it

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  • 9 years ago
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    Your three body paragraphs are well chosen.

    For your Thesis statement, how about something like

    "It's payback time; they helped us, now it's time that we help them in their golden years."

    and you can follow that up with your description of the nursing home and how it removes so many cares from the Senior citizens. They fought our wars, raised our parents, etc.


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