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This disparity was later to become a disintegrative factor in Nigerian society as corrective measures in employment had to be taken , which drew charges of discrimination by the south.

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    9 years ago
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    This disparity was later to become a disintegrative factor in Nigerian society

    as corrective measures in employment had to be taken, which drew charges

    of discrimination by the south.

    這種不對盤在後來當就業方面的修正措施不得不進行時就變成了奈及利亞社會崩解的因素之一, 它招致了南方人民對於種族歧視的指控.

    說明:

    奈及利亞社會主要由Hausa, Yoruba, Igbo三大種族所組成, 北方Hausa(回教子民)挾其人口優勢(佔70%)壟斷了軍事與政治, 攫取了該國主要源自石油與農產外銷的利益, 造成南方二大族(基督教徒眾)的嚴重怨恨, 在該國引起了無數暴亂.

    2011-09-27 13:52:19 補充:

    本句中which的先行詞是factor, 中間隔了很遠, .

    而"in Nigerian society"與"as ocrrective measure in employment had to be taken"是修飾性的副詞片語與副詞子句.

    2011-09-27 15:45:13 補充:

    謝謝您, Snackshop大.

    在下有20多年與奈及利亞貿易的經驗, 曾多次深入該國鄉村部落, 參與節日慶典或婚喪、加冕等禮儀, 因此略抒拙見..

    2011-10-03 09:36:26 補充:

    我所述的經歷是100%的事實, Mingi信不信並不重要

    倒是Mingi的文法還有很大的加強空間.

    本句的which在一整句附加的逗號之後, 先行詞可為修飾語前面的名詞, 亦可為逗號前面的一整句, 但絕不會是主詞; 也就是說, 先行詞不可能是disparity.

    2011-10-03 13:11:16 補充:

    雲凍大譯得很到位! +1

    Source(s): *Infinito - 無極*
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  • 而且Infinito - 無極也要+1!

    不了解事實、不合己意就說「反正我就不信」、「不對盤」,

    跟自己不對就說「不對盤」,其實自己早已跟事情「不對盤」了。

    哀哉…哀哉。

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  • 雲凍
    Lv 6
    9 years ago

    這種歧異在後來就業補正措施不得不採行之時,在奈及利亞變成一種受到南方種族歧視指控的社會崩解因素。

    純就句子結構與字義翻譯,愚見供參考。

    2011-10-03 10:44:10 補充:

    或者社會分裂因素..。

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  • 9 years ago

    This disparity was later to become a disintegrative factor in Nigerian society as corrective measures in employment had to be taken, which drew charges of discrimination by the south.

    基於在就業市場上須作出修訂方案而造成的不平等, 是日後直接導致奈及利亞社會上產生分歧之成因, 亦成為南方(人民)提出指控歧視之理由。

    2011-09-28 16:24:05 補充:

    which drew charges..... which 是指disparity (不平等)

    2011-09-28 16:40:40 補充:

    估計這種流暢英文是節錄自報章的報導。

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  • 9 years ago

    您好,

    在下認為無極大師對當地的社會背景有深入的了解,翻出來的也較精確,請您採用他的翻譯,

    抱歉在下的翻譯較不精確,辜負您的評分。

    snackshop敬上

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  • jose
    Lv 6
    9 years ago

    This disparity was later to become a disintegrative factor in Nigerian society as corrective measures in employment had to be taken , which drew charges of discrimination by the south這極大的差距,造成後來奈及利亞社會分裂,而必須藉由就業挫施來補救,但這又引起南方(地區)指控"歧視".

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  • 9 years ago

    這種差異後來成為拆解因素在尼日利亞社會就業的糾正措施,須考慮,其中提請歧視的收費由南。

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