Oi Kei asked in 社會及文化語言 · 8 years ago

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As time progresses, people are continuing todevelop new technology and devices for people to use. They make life easier. Ithink the motor vehicle is a good example of this. Vehicles are of many types,such as the bus, cab, car, train. I think the car is the best of all vehicles.There are three things that prove my thesis is correct. Firstly, I can drive mycar everywhere that I like. Secondly, I regard sitting in my own car as morecomfortable than sitting in a public vehicle. Lastly, I believe that publictransport fees are more expensive than the gasoline cost. Let me explain themone by one.First of all, I can drive my car everywherethat I like. As public transport cannot take me to everywhere, it is veryinconvenient for me. People may say that I can take a taxi, but it is veryexpensive for me to do so. If I take a taxi, I need to pay about $20 for oneway. Moreover, when I feel bored at midnight, I can take a joyride. There willnot be any public transport services at midnight. Therefore, I believe aprivate car is the best.Secondly, I regard sitting in my own car asmore comfortable and safe than sitting in public transportation. The seat in mycar is wider than public transport seating. There is a excellent safetyequipment in my car. For example, there are seat belts in my car. There is asafety bubble cushion that prevents my head getting hurt in an accident. On theother hand, there are no seat belts on the bus. The seats on the bus are verytight. I do not have enough space to move. Therefore, I believe a private caris the best.

Update:

Finally, I believe the public transport fare is more expensive than the cost of gasoline. Suppose I need to take the bus twice a day, and it costs me $5.10. On Saturday and Sunday, if I need to take the bus four times, it costs me $10.20.

Update 2:

It cost me $183.6 for a month. I do not think that I need to pay $183 for the gasoline cost per month. Therefore, I believe a private car is the best. In conclusion, there are three reasons that can show us that a private car is the best mode of transport.

Update 3:

The first one is that I can go everywhere with my car. The second one is I feel more comfortable and safe when I am sitting in my car. The last one is driving my own car is cheaper than taking public transport. A private car is the best mode of transport in the world.

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  • Jenkin
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    8 years ago
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    As time progresses, people are continuing to develop new technology and devices for people to use. {They [這個they有點confusing,按文法是前面的subject=people,但明顯你是指technology(單數)和devices(眾數)加埋的they] make life easier.}[可以改為These developments make life easier. I think the motor vehicle is a good example of this. There are many types of vehicle,such as buses, cabs[的士不是機動車種-是一種出租的car], cars, trains. I think the car is the best in all vehicles. There are three things that prove my thesis [thesis這字的意思是主題,你想說的是命題或立論?英語人會用my argument作為你立論跟人討論的用詞] is correct. Firstly, I can drive my car everywhere that I like. Secondly, I regard sitting in my own car as more comfortable than sitting in a public vehicle. Lastly, I believe that public transport fees are more expensive than the gasoline cost. Let me explain them one by one.First of all, I can drive my car everywhere that I like. As public transport cannot take me to everywhere, it is very inconvenient for me. People may say that I can take a taxi, but it is very expensive for me to do so. If I take a taxi, I need to pay about $20 for one-way. Moreover, when I feel bored at midnight, I can take a joyride. There will not be any public transport services at midnight. Therefore, I believe a private car is the best.Secondly, I regard sitting in my own car as more comfortable and safe than sitting in public transportation. The seat of my car is wider than public transport seating. There are excellent safety equipment in my car.[後面展示多於一種] For example, there are seat belts in my car, a safety inflatable cushion that prevents my head getting hurt in an accident. On the other hand, there are no seat belts on the bus. The seats on the bus are very tight. I do not have enough space to move. Therefore, I believe a private car is the best.

    2011-09-16 16:14:10 補充:

    .[如果你是論證便要提出實質數據-如果你自駕車同樣的距離和路程要多少汽油費-我相信如果每天出入兩次你也開車公共車費$5.1(不知你是否用學童優惠價來算)但假如你是自駕便不可用這特惠價來比較了。我相信走$2.5一程車費坐某些公共交通大約可以走5公里距左右吧(大約三個mtr站),用汽油計可能也要$5以上一程吧(大約$1/km),未計算你的停車費和車價攤分計作每天支出]

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  • 8 years ago

    are you going shoo????

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