幫我看我的英文文法的問題????!!!!!

My english is not fluent, but every day I read articles and listen to English songs in English to enhance my English skills.
我的英文不流利,但我每天讀英語文章和聽英文歌來增強我的英語能力。

幫我看我的英文文法哪裡錯了?
Update: 我修改了一下
My english is not fluent, but everyday I would read english articles and listen to English songs to improve my English skills.
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