allen asked in 社會與文化語言 · 9 years ago

幫我看我的英文文法的問題????!!!!!

My english is not fluent, but every day I read articles and listen to English songs in English to enhance my English skills.

我的英文不流利,但我每天讀英語文章和聽英文歌來增強我的英語能力。

幫我看我的英文文法哪裡錯了?

Update:

我修改了一下

My english is not fluent, but everyday I would read english articles and listen to English songs to improve my English skills.

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  • 9 years ago
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    您修改了的句子:

    My english is not fluent, but everyday I would read english articles and listen to English songs to improve my English skills.

    文法沒有錯誤.

    用字方面的建議:

    1) 專有名詞、專有形容詞別忘記起首大寫.

    2) 表示每天的習慣用現在簡單式即可, 不要用助動詞would, 它是意志未來式will的弱化.

    3) improve或enhance皆適當.

    4) English skills改為English proficiency.

    skills是用於個別項目, 例如writing skill, speaking skill等.

    My English is not fluent, but everyday I read English articles and listen

    to English songs to improve my English proficiency.

    2011-09-16 10:57:13 補充:

    我的意思不是說English skills不對, 只是建議較好的用字.

    2011-09-17 10:52:07 補充:

    everyday是形容詞, 用作副詞要分開 ---> every day, 我複製句子時沒看到版主把原來對的修改成錯的, 多謝銀角大王指出.

    2011-09-17 10:56:22 補充:

    fluent用來修飾人或語言都是可以的.

    My English is not fluent enough.(O)

    I cannot speak fluent English. (O)

    fluently是副詞 ---> I cannot speak English fluently.

    Source(s): *Infinito - 無極*
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  • 9 years ago

    Use "every day", not "everyday" ("everyday" is an adjective, as in "Robbery is an everyday occurence in New York City." But, "Robbery takes place in NYC every day.").

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  • 9 years ago

    一般來說 fluent 這個字後面要接語言 例: I speak fluent English.

    而且大部分會用 I do not speak fluent English 或 I do not speak English fluently.

    所以 我會傾向用 I do not speak fluent English 或 I do not speak English fluently, so(比BUT好) I read English articles and (English可省略)songs to improve my English skills(泛指各項listening, oral speaking skills 是OK的) everyday.

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  • 9 years ago

    在下也認為would可以去掉。

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  • 9 years ago

    你的第二句比第一句好多了。 但英語除了不要有錯誤之外, 越順口、越自然越好。 我會說 I am not fluent in English, 比 My English is not fluent 更自然,用的人更多。還有 everyday 是形容詞,在這裡是錯的。表示慣常性的「每天」要用副詞 every day。 最後, 既然是每天都做的事,這是事實,would 是多餘的。

    I am not fluent in English, but I read English articles and listen to English songs every day to improve my English skills.

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