我自己寫了一個作文請大大幫忙改錯

I have a dream is to do something that i good at,

In my childhood,i saw many stupid child do many bad thing on me include very bad word or chick me by foot,

I can tolerate those boy,and look closely those bad boy'sTreacherous face as matter of fact every word and behavior become a sign to realize the person what u are , when a boy try to do something on me, I can predict it and avoied any badthing happen ,suddently i learned a skill , i found out it can help me on future.

I realize that i am good at determine a person ,i think maybe i can major class human society, i can go to collage and major some class the ca is much closer to my talent,

as the matter of fact, my major in school is computer science ,the reason why i choose computer science is those kinds job's oppetunity in taiwan has alot of chance and high salary,

after i graduate from school,i will get a pt job and spend more time on searching a work is suitable for my characteristic

Update:

目前是想說多練習英文作文,以後說不定會用來當英文自傳,不過說真的這種專長根本不算天分,應該叫人生經驗吧,只是在逃避現實而已,我好痛苦

Update 2:

一職攜帶那些不快樂的包袱哪叫專長呢,我擅長的不應該是這種事情,建立在過去的痛苦之中

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  • 9 years ago
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    大大,您好:

    以下是我的回答,請卓參。

    可以順道請問一下這是您英文自傳嗎?找工作要加油哦!^^

    I have a dream which is to do something I am good at. In my childhood, I saw many stupid children do many bad things on me, including scorned at me or kicked me. I could tolerate these boys’ behaviors, and look their mean face clearly. As a matter of fact, their word and behaviors are the symbol to let people realize what you are. When a boy tried to do something bad to me, I could predict and prevent it happen. At that time, I seemed to learn a way to help me out in the future. In addition, I also realize that I am good at categorizing a person, and I think I can take some classes about human society in college because those classes are closer to my talent. In fact, my major in college is computer science; nevertheless, the reason that I took this major is because this major is highly connected to higher job opportunities and salaries in Taiwan . After graduated from the college, I will put all my efforts on hunting a job more suitable to my characteristics.

    Source(s): 不才的小弟
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