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小桃 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 10 years ago

英文文法問題 幫我看一下句子有錯嗎?.

Yesterday, I chatted with my friend before I went to school. I hadn't seen her for lnog time. I talked to her that recetly I have an fearful obsession about my future.

中文意思大概是:昨天在我上課之前我去和我朋友聊天,我好久沒有見到她了,我告訴他最近我有對未來恐懼的想法。

Update:

I told to her that recetly I have an fearful obsession about my future.

這一句是這樣的 我打錯了。

Update 2:

請問一下 1.chat 是指線上聊天嗎? 但是我想表達是的和他見面的聊天

2.我好久沒有見到他,這句不可以過去完成式嗎?因為是發生在昨天的那一段時間,所以我才用過去完成式的。

請各位不吝指教的幫我解惑一下謝謝大家了。

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  • 10 years ago
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    Yesterday, I chatted with my friend before I went to school. I hadn't

    seen her for a long time. I talked to her that recently I had had a fearful

    obsession about my future.

    您的句子基本意思表達得很好, 文法上的小瑕疵已為您訂正.

    建議句子結構方面可以再組織一下, 會比較精鍊順暢:

    Before I went to school yesterday, I chatted with a friend of mine whom I

    hadn't seen for a long time. I told her that I had recently had an fearful

    obsession about my future.

    昨天上學之前, 我跟我一個許久不見的朋友聊天, 我告訴她我近來老是對前途有著揮之不去的恐懼念頭.

    2011-09-08 10:13:11 補充:

    訂正: an 改為a

    2011-09-08 10:20:17 補充:

    另一版本:

    Before going to school yesterday, I chatted with a long lost friend. I told her that I had

    recently had a fearful obssession about my future.

    2011-09-08 10:28:28 補充:

    老登大大請先別急著吆喝, ECLIPSE的句子有文法瑕疵:

    > I haven't seen her for a long time.

    昨天聊天可能是見了面的, 說這句話時是今天, 所以不宜用現在完成式.

    >I told her that I have an fearful idea....

    have應改為had, 使時態一致.

    2011-09-08 10:33:14 補充:

    甚至於應進一步改為過去完成式:

    I told her that I had had an fearful idea.....

    2011-09-08 14:41:17 補充:

    chat就是聊天, 線上的或見面的都適用.

    「我好久沒有見到他」: 您昨天聊天見過面, 今天述說用過去完成式是正確的.

    2011-09-08 14:46:37 補充:

    老登大,

    誰說chat一定是網上即時通?

    原文未提online, 就應以真實生活中的聊天視之, 怎可認為不會見到?

    版主也證實了這個見面聊天的觀點.

    2011-09-09 09:40:19 補充:

    I chatted online with my friend....

    I chatted on the phone with my friend...

    如果沒有online或on the phone, 應視為見面的聊天.

    Source(s): *Infinito - 無極*
  • 10 years ago

    都被你們講光ㄌ== 我要講啥呀= =

    Source(s): 自己
  • 10 years ago

    Yesterday, I 'd chatted with my friend before I went to school. I haven't seen her for a long time. I talked to her that recently I have a fearful obsession about my future.

    補充: I 'd chatted with my friend before I went to school. 此句開頭用過去完成式會更佳唷~ 可強調 chatting 這事件先發生^^

    若是要寫文章,可再稍加修飾,例如:

    Yesterday, I chatted with my friend whom I hadn't heard from before I went to school. Because I haven't seen her for a long time, I told her that recently I had a fearful obsession about my future.

    以上句子看似很多,其實只有兩句。一段文章的基本句數約為4~6個句子,所以您可以再多補充2~3句,讓這段文章符合基本句數。

    希望有幫到您~

    Source(s): myself
  • 10 years ago

    Yesterday, I chatted with my friend before I went to school.

    I haven't seen her for a long time.

    I told her that I have an fearful idea about my future recently.

    小小修改了一下~ 希望對你有幫助囉~

    2011-09-08 15:41:58 補充:

    感謝各位大師的指教,小妹修改時只修正為較口語話的說法,虛心受教了。

    Source(s): myself
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