西昂 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 9 years ago

[中翻英] 如果我將漸漸遺忘,你還願意幫我記得嗎?

[中翻英]

如果我將漸漸遺忘,你還願意幫我記得嗎?

情況:

AD(阿茲海默)者,想問愛人的ㄧ句話。

不需要刻意翻出遺忘"什麼"和記得"什麼",我比較重視意境!!

希望能簡潔詩意。

不要中文式英語和翻譯機。

非常謝謝!!!

Update:

英文高手好多喔!!!

(包括每次在意見欄提供翻譯的英文達人們)

真的超級感謝大家!!!

提供很多表達方式,受益很多!!!

因為此句需要詩意,所以我就以"詩意"的句子來進行投票。

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  • 9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    如果我將漸漸遺忘,你還願意幫我記得嗎?

    If my memory is gonna fade away, will you help keep it for me?

    If I shall gradually lose my memory, will you reserve it in yours for me?

    說明:

    1) help後面的不定詞可省略to.

    2) yours = your memory

    it = my memory

    reserve it in yours for me : 幫我把它儲存在你的記憶裡; 幫我記得

    喪失記憶不是意志, 要用I shall 不可用I will.

    2011-09-06 10:40:26 補充:

    >Our dreams may, in me, be to fade,

    >but, they, in you, will continue to be made.

    以詩文體裁而言, Prisoner這兩句寫得真好, 為您拍拍手!

    2011-09-07 10:39:04 補充:

    借用Joseph大的refresh:

    If my memory is gonna fade away, will you help refresh it for me?

    If I shall gradually lose my memory, will you refresh it in yours for me?

    2011-09-15 16:13:55 補充:

    The YK+ voting device is by no means a genuine competition because the answers are not appraised or assessed by academic authorities, but by Dicks and Toms. Pls take it easy, prisoner. Those voting for my answer were not controlled by me. Why not invite your friends to browse the candidate answers?

    Source(s): *Infinito - 無極*
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  • 9 years ago

    To prisoner26535

    因為有ㄧ個以上的滿意答案,所以交由投票。

    希望此舉不會得罪各位達人,請見諒!!

    2011-09-15 17:20:27 補充:

    雖然知道有些投票者不會用心琢磨這些美好的翻譯句子

    (甚至只是為了賺點數而隨便投票)

    但因為我自己做不出決定,所以最終還是忍痛交與投票。

    (有感近日發現許多英文達人隱身在YK+,也有信心這些英文達人應該會參與英文相關問題的投票)

    這並非不重視各位英文達人所提供的翻譯!!

    因為無論結果如何,各位英文達人所提供的句子(無論在答案區或意見欄)

    必定也會幫助許多人思考和運用!!!

    To Infinito - 無極

    謝謝您有時會額外提供相關片語和詳解詞彙上的運用,

    真的受益無窮^^

    2011-09-15 22:47:31 補充:

    To prisoner26535

    看來看去還是不知道"真正的問題"出在哪,就請都息怒吧~~~PLS!!

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  • Oreo
    Lv 5
    9 years ago

    如果我將漸漸遺忘,你還願意幫我記得嗎?

    If my memories fade away with time, will you look back and cherish

    the memories you've made with me?

    By the way, memories may fade as the time goes by but they won't age

    a day and are always in your heart.

    Source(s): me
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  • 9 years ago

    Ahh,

    this is too easy. Take this:

    Our dreams may, in me, be to fade,

    but, they, in you, will continue to be made.

    They don't call me the most beautiful poet in the institution for nothing, dude!

    Cry for me, ladies!

    2011-09-06 08:00:14 補充:

    I meant, the most beautiful poet, ever!

    2011-09-15 08:49:34 補充:

    Here comes the voting machine.

    Why?

    2011-09-15 20:35:58 補充:

    invite your friends to browse the candidate answers?

    What a joke & shame on you!

    2011-09-15 20:37:09 補充:

    Also, shame on "your friends" as well.

    What a joke!

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  • 9 years ago

    If I forget, you still want to help me remember?

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  • jose
    Lv 6
    9 years ago

    如果我將漸漸遺忘,你還願意幫我記得嗎?

    Should my memories ever fade away, are you willing to help me by refreshing them?

    refresh

    a : to restore or maintain by renewing supply : replenish

    b : arouse, stimulate

    2011-09-13 11:50:23 補充:

    To infinito:

    Use any word as you wish, i don't own it.

    both yours and prisoner's are good!

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  • 9 years ago

    無極大的解答真的超有詩意的。推一個!

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  • 9 years ago

    If I should slowly lose everything I have come to know, would you be willing to be the keeper of my memory?

    Source(s): myself
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  • 9 years ago

    表示可能發生的事情

    If I gradually forget,will you be willing to help me to remember?

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  • 9 years ago

    如果我將漸漸遺忘,你還願意幫我記得嗎?

     

    If I am forgetting with little by little, would you be willing to remember it for me?

    If this would be misplaced someday, would you be willing to keep it for me?

    If our memories are misplaced with time, will you be willing to keep it in the heart for me?

    不知道怎麼翻比較好~"~ 參考囉~

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